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My Little Ventrue Pt.7 Ch.16 (Ch. 110)
🕑 Added 2021-06-06 21:55:08 +0000 UTCGetting somewhere!
I actively tried to speed up the pacing in this chapter. I think I've been slowing it down a lot, because I've been reading Stephen King a lot lately, and that dude's prose linger and drag on for aaaaaages. My writing pace still lingers, but I manage to get through some pretty huge story beats faster this chapter. Let me know how it reads.
I was also tempted to add a whole section here, exploring Jeremiah and Azamel in depth. That could have easily hit 30k words, over 2 chapters. While Jeremiah and Azamel may be characters my imagination wants to explore, I realized it was a nasty case of author bias. Authors love to explore their side characters, even when it's to the detriment of the reader.
You'll see where, when you read the chapter.
Edit: I haven't missed doing a check for a bookmark note left in a chapter in months. I forget this time, and left one in! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU--it's a minor note, thankfully, just a detail about the fire spreading in the area. I've updated these uploads to have it removed. Scary to leave one in though, cause they sometimes have spoilers!
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AR
These cliffhangers are brutal lol
Memoryleak
Also, nice to know old Jack can communicate when new Jack is at the wheel. Been a few chapters since he took over and wasn’t sure if he could since he never spoke up.
