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Editing update
🕑 Added 2023-01-08 01:42:53 +0000 UTCHello, Dear Readers!
Sorry for the radio silence. First and foremost, I wanted to get the re-editing of Volume 3 out of my hair, so that I could proceed with the upcoming chapters without having to worry about continuity-errors. It ate up a lot of time, but it's finally done!
There are only three minor "retcons", and they are as follows:
- I changed things around to clarify that Sebastian never learned that Leo was playing Bel, to keep things consistent.
- I streamlined the big duel at the end by simplifying some infodumps and cutting some of Leo's sidetracks to make things flow better.
- I changed the way Leo taunted Penny into action, so that it's less mean.
Other than that, there are lots and lots of small fixes (mainly typos and tense-errors), but nothing major. You can find an EPUB and a PDF version attached to this post. They obviously aren't nearly as professionally done as the officially published versions, but hey, at least I tried.
I will also reupload all of these on ScribbleHub and RoyalRoad tomorrow. Now that I'm done with this, I'll also try to hammer out a new chappie before the end of the week, but it's already 2:40 AM over here, and I should really by sleeping already.
Anyhow, see you all tomorrow (well, technically today, but whatever), and till then, ciao!
