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Minor update and clarifications
🕑 Added 2023-05-04 18:59:40 +0000 UTCJust a tiny heads-up about a few changes, my dear readers.
First off, I somehow managed to completely and consistently mess up the Archon's name, and I have no idea how. It was supposed to be Polemos (Greek for "war", and the first half of the "polemarch" office). I'd like to say it was an autocorrect-messup, but I wrote all of these parts on my PC, so I have no excuse.
Secondly, I'm tweaking the info-dumb part even further to make it less info-dumpy.
The two most important changes are the complete removal of the reincarnation-topic, as it's covered in detail in the upcoming chapter part, as well as mimicking the original ancient Athenian office of the Archon a bit closer, and have the three archons, Bel, Polemos, and Deus, mirror the archon eponymos, the polemarch, and the archon basileus, respectively.
That's all for now. The changes will go live with tomorrow's update, as I'm still fiddling with the details. Might also add a bit more meta-discussion into the chapter part with the girls, but I'm not sure yet, as I'm planning to give Leo some wind-down time to think in the upcoming parts where it might fit better. We'll see.
