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The Simulacrum - Chapter 114 - Part 2

🕑 Added 2023-05-22 17:32:06 +0000 UTC

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Egathentale

QC done. Didn't change much, but got rid of some repetitions and a few typos, plus added a few more descriptors to get the tension across a bit better. That's all, folks. Ciao!

Vega

Except Leo can’t really accept that. this is all a simulation based off novels/tropes. Leo watched this world build itself from the ground up. Starting from a school with only a few real people. This isn’t a game, this is a story, it used to be Josh’s but apparently based off off hand remarks from the “creators” whoever Leo was before this sounds like an attention whore. So now the story is mostly about Leo. So while Roland may be correct that doesn’t necessarily mean he is right.

Patryk Rys

Tbh Roland is kind of right from logical point of view

Egathentale

Hello, dear readers. Fair warning: I didn't get a wink of sleep last night, so this might need another QC pass. I might also fine-tune the initial argument a little on the second go, but for now, I really need to get some shuteye. I'll make another comment later. For now, have a nice day, and see ya all later.


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