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Akane, Asuna, Karin [Blue Archive]
🕑 Added 2025-07-22 18:00:13 +0000 UTCMain (18p) + Omake (111p)
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This is a really experimental set that I wanted to try out, and to be honest I'm not that confident. The ideas I have are plenty but the application to the set was quite lacking in my opinion. I really like the idea of a chatroom POV especially with strong NTR or voyeurism element to it, makes it more interesting in my opinion. This is also my first set with dialogue and I definitely feels stiff writing it. I barely have any dialogue writing knowledge or experiences, and it still doesn't feel natural to me yet.
Depending on the performance on this set, I might just cancel the rest of the chatroom sets and just continue with the Main 30 pages sets since this took as long if not a bit longer to make. I feel a bit defeated since I can't realize all my ideas on this set and possibly future sets. Took 3 hours alone to make the templates, and I still find it lacking and doesn't feel like a natural chatroom.
Anyways, I hope some of you do like it. 🍎
これは自分でもかなり実験的なセットで、正直あまり自信はありません。アイデアはたくさんあったのですが、それをセットにうまく落とし込めなかったというのが正直なところです。チャットルーム視点の構成は個人的にとても面白いと思っていて、特にNTRや覗き見要素が強いとより惹き込まれる気がします。
今回が初めてのセリフ付きセットでもあるのですが、書いていてすごくぎこちなく感じました。セリフの書き方についての知識や経験がほとんどなくて、まだ自然に書けている感じがしません。
このセットの反応次第では、今後のチャットルーム形式のセットは中止して、メインの30ページ作品の制作に戻るかもしれません。今回のセットも作るのにかなり時間がかかってしまって、テンプレートを作るだけでも3時間ほどかかりましたが、それでもまだ自然なチャットルームの雰囲気にはなっていないと感じています。
とはいえ、少しでも楽しんでもらえたら嬉しいです。🍎
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Comments
D.P
There would have been a continuations for each main sets to connect them. And some explanations and twists in them. But I've decided to cancel all of it and just continue with the main.
Silver Crow
Pretty cool set, definitely want to see some more (maybe with more C & C girls). Tho, I think that going anonymous in a private group chat is a bit weird.
Manaka Sajo
good!
