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Shoh Update and Poll (October #3) (NSFW - Profanity)
🕑 Added 2019-10-21 19:00:02 +0000 UTCAdded about 5,000 more words to Chapter 3 of ShoH: all of the build-up is done with and Riel and Chase's separate missions are embarking in earnest! I'm not totally happy with the pacing of the chapter--transitions feel a bit choppy, but I can always go back and refine them once I push out all this content--but I'm very happy with the pace I've been setting recently!
I'm also concentrating on Riel's route for now, wherein you infiltrate an exclusive party at a certain minister's mansion and get two blasts from the past! And speaking of blasts from the past...
This might just be the dumbest poll ever held on Patreon, but what insult would you want to call Ebert, seeing him for the first time again?
Comments
Lena Nguyen
I'm so glad you feel this way! It's not often that I write just unrepentant, awful characters, so I'm so glad you hate him! π
Lena Nguyen
Meat Man is surprisingly popular for such a terrible name lmao!
Alex T.
I also really like the fact that we can see his lack of professionalism in the way he treats Aerin. Beyond just interrupting Riel, it also shows he has an inherent disrespect for his chain for command, which (rightfully) pisses Riel off. He's a really well written bigot, I absolutely hate him.
Alex T.
I changed my mind. I was going to write-in vote "Bitch", but I really fell in love with Meat Man. A terrible name for a terrible Norm.
