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🕑 Added 2024-12-10 13:36:56 +0000 UTC

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Antony Claughton

It does feel like a few chapters end abruptly. Examples are the previous chapter, or where Uriel asks them about fighting demons.

HankTheMoose

This is not a typo ;)

HankTheMoose

I'll flesh it out a bit for the RR post then, though that'll still be a while. Overall, it's going to be a long-term payoff.

Antony Claughton

Nooooooo!!!!! We didn’t get more Jori/Bernt interaction! But seriously. Bernt spends chapters working to get that connection, and our only payoff is a little bit at the end of one chapter? We all love the Bernt and Jori interactions which are mostly lost in this book. Cutting down the one we have is a bad move in my mind. Please consider extending that conversation. He’ll, we didn’t even get to see Bernt’s reaction to Jori’s save the imps plan! I would seriously think about adding a chapter between this one and the previous one.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Alexander Smith

Good spot

Hailhound

Noticed Narald says “to protect… all of humanity” is that a typo given half of the countries population is nonhuman, or just like racism reflected in the traditional ceremony?


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