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The Alpha Gender Release Day!!!

🕑 Added 2023-04-21 05:20:20 +0000 UTC
The Alpha Gender Release Day!!!

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Mike the3DGuy

Oh wow, thanks for the compliments, and also the critiques. Yeah: it IS a VN trope, that the MC's dick is always too big, and I am conscious of that. But I needed a way for him to be especially sexually desireable to at least particular women for the story to work. In this case there's at least a plot reason for him to be so well-hung. You think about a woman like Olivia: highly sexually desireable, wealthy, etc: she could get any man she wants, especially in this environment of the Change. If the MC were just replaceable to her, there's no driver for a large part of the plot. Yes, I know it's going to be too dry for a lot of gamers, meaning too much set-up. I accept that. But building the story is essential for me. Hopefully the feeling that it's filler will wear off as the story gets going into the more interesting aspects. But criticism understood and well-taken! Happy you like the voice work. It is a struggle, and it's certainly imperfect. I think as voice AI improves (as it will, very rapidly), it'lll get even better, and maybe I can revisit early scenes and clean up the voice work. I'm happy that there's one person at least who thought it added to the VN.

catman499

Really enjoyed it I can tell you put a ton of work in it and it shows. You asked for a few critiques so I figured I put my two cents in. My only critiques, and they are minor, are (1) I think there is a little too much filler. Meaning I think too much time is spent with the MC talking to the guys in the office or playing pool with the guy in the bar or talking to the construction crew. I find myself rushing through those parts to get to the scenes with the women of the story; and (2) Personally I find the MC's dick a little too big. Just personal preference though. But the game is great I wasn't sure how I would like the voiced the content but it sounds great and adds a lot. I also really liked the news reports in the back ground I thought it made the world feel real. Obviously, the artwork is top notch. The scenes with Nina are my favorite and Olivia is awesome. Great great work by far the best in the fmg community as far as a VN goes hands down

Halle

Glad to hear that , Thanks forget the hard work .


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