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Chapter 32

🕑 Added 2023-11-29 17:29:16 +0000 UTC

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Sebas Tian

I would go about by playing on seeing a vision of the future. She can do that to some extent as well. He can explain it that instead of having numerous visions, he has had one massive vision of the future that he can mostly recall. And how he has used that information to change events in his and the separatists favour. But because so much of the info would be impossible to believe without evidence, he had to get in a position to be trusted. Now how much of that is BS is up to him but I could easily see that being how he goes about it.

Null

Need more!!!!

2bluefish

“Sir Isaac Newton is the deadliest son of a bitch in space.”

elsicava

Sunday. My last paper is on Friday so I'll only be able to start writing then.

DatCameraMON

Is that just a hope you have or?

JAMAJ

Out of sight, out of mind lol

Kyle Pemberton

New chapter tonight?

EnderScroll

So is anyone else concerned about the implications of hundreds if not thousands of fractional light speed meteors now traveling throughout the galaxy… In the wise words of mass effect: “I dare to assume you ignorant jackasses know that space is empty. Once you fire this hunk of metal, it keeps going till it hits something. That can be a ship, or the planet behind that ship. It might go off into deep space and hit somebody else in ten thousand years. If you pull the trigger on this, you are ruining someone's day, somewhere and sometime. That is why you check your damn targets! That is why you wait for the computer to give you a damn firing solution! That is why, Serviceman Chung, we do not "eyeball it!" This is a weapon of mass destruction! You are not a cowboy shooting from the hip!”

Jaxer30

Rain counted on that happening, that's why he's pushing the election for 2 days tops, it's now or never

Kana

I guess the next chapter is going to be the supreme commander voting procedure and it's subsequent impact.

tibbish

Either sides' ability to win is poor though right now. And the big issue, the real one, is trying to find a way to removing Dooku and/or Palpatine from power. As long as either one holds their political power they can do all kinds of nasty things. They are ultimately the institigators of the war and the ones who will gain the most from winning a war either way. After all the Seperatists are Palpatines' creation.

arnumart

If the war will come to an end with a false flag operation than I say just attack when ready. It is going to take months to rebuild ships on both sides. But as soon as the confederacy is ready I say attack. Kill Dooku with the Jedi killing droids, blame the republic and than attack. If Dooku is no longer alive to be a pawn than you have a good chance to win.

EnderScroll

A non-Sunday chapter!?

Eich8noe

Since we havent heard from the dynamic Duo in a while i Kind of Hope that at least the only certified Sith killer the Jedi have is looking into it. Or i might have missed Something... Probably even.

elsicava

He did tell them a Sith is in their midst, remember? He told Plo Koon at Metalorn. He just never said it was Palpatine, because then that'd be fucking crazy and he'd be treated as another Sith psy-op.

Notcreepycreeper

I'm really enjoying this series. But every chapter shows again how much ratting out Palpatine would be. Like I get that most wouldn't believe, but for all of his plots, he can't find a way to pass a msg to one Jedi master about the Sith in their midst? Ofc they wouldn't just believe him, but it seems a stretch that the Jedi wouldn't even check. Also he grew up with Starwars, so he knows who the 'good' Jedi are

Confused

I'm not saying Palpy would kill Padme merely use her Peace talks attempt to stage a False Flag to re-spark the war.

Rune Shadow

That's why he's pushing his cousin to get the vote done before news can travel to the outer rim of this he predicted something like this would happen.

Bishop7053

Palps is definitely gonna try and off padme during the peace talks, she basically has the senate by the balls right now and her death would guarantee the war would go full steam ahead with no chance of quarter or mercy from the republic. Now if our boy saves her in a manner that exposes dooku as a traitor and palps on the same team it could lead to a further civil war among the republic and probably quite a few systems that were loyalist joining the cis. And probably with Barris help get a split among the jedi as well with some joining her. Anakin would go with padme which would definitely bring other jedi.

Saltberg

My thoughts exactly

Mrsean22

Rain gonna tell Tann and Bariss what he has on Dooku it seems. Which is Dooku sending very important information to someone on the Republic side and using said information. Now the Supreme Commander picked does seem like it's gonna be Tann with Rain making sure a vote happens like right now. It is the only chance for Tann to get the position. Tann implying that Rain is getting a big promotion which I'm guessing is Admiral if he has to worry about politics on the regular. Now for the Republic side. Padme is technically speaking truths here. It isn't just clone that are dying but Republic citizens who are fighting with the clones. Padme basically said "You willing to lose Republic citizens that could include your own people in more battles like this one?" with the majority of the Senate saying no. The galaxy hasn't seen a battle like this in a LONG time with these type of casualties. Can only imagine how the Republic military is reacting to this. Like a good amount of the Senate were basically insulting the military for this lose. They got pretty close to winning even with Rain doing a lot of outside the box thinking to slow them down. And the Republic military did have their best Admirals, Generals and Jedi Generals for this campaign.

Flash Red

“Since Rain is telling them everything now” What makes you think Rain is gonna tell them EVERYTHING instead of some things? Remember Tann is a smart officer and is gonna want irrefutable proof of whatever Rain claims. As of now he only has dirt on Dooku being a Republic spy and nothing else.

Flash Red

I doubt it, more like he’ll tell them about Dooku’s treachery and that he has coconspirators in the Republic.

Flash Red

Bruh….. the empire was filled with corruption and slavery. In fact it was also notoriously human-centric which is why you almost never see non humans amongst its leadership and military.

robofin117

Good luck on the exams.

FuschiaKnight

Gotta love when the Empire fans reveal they grasped absolutely none of the message of the stories or indeed of real life. I weep for the poor state of reading comprehension education.

Lord Beef Broth

Are...are you somehow under the impression that the Empire of all regimes is devoid of corruption and slavery?

Avdrdr

Darn cut off before the reveal of the the Sith plot

SwiftFate

Lebowski

Edit suggestions: I admit I am not the most well-versed as to why that would me, and hope you can share with me your insights. that would me -> that would be I would not pretend to understand how to Force works, but would you allow me to make my own prediction of the near future? how to Force -> how the Force

Stav Tri

While I wouldn't go passed saying padme screwing over bonteri's plans, I will say that padme definitely painted a target on her back for the chancellor, remember that there was assassination attempt ordered by sidious before in the Star wars film, I believe it was the clone wars show. So once her use is done, now that Anakin is MIA, she is sort of a sitting duck for assassination, and we know mirrthfully isn't not drawn to killing off important characters that should die later but ended up dying early to bonteri's plans or indirect consequences, such as one of the Jedi council members.

Darth Bayes

Hmmm. Some other arguments that could have been made: "There have been two major powers in the galaxy before, Senator, and that meant ten thousand years of constant war, cold or hot. Ten thousand years of war is a thousand Columexes, Senator. You speak out of a shock to your sensibilities, not any real understanding of the situation." (referencing the Sith Empire) Or just throw up your standard suite of anti-Separatist talking points, probably corporations doing amoral corporation things, like virtual slavery. Everyone has got to have a standard set of taking points for stuff like that.

Confused

I say it plays into palpatines hands cause it was noted by Rain and Tann that any ceasefire that’s called after this battle, Would then be followed by a false flag to reignite the war and weaken any future peace attempts. And Padme is making the opening move towards that calling for peace negotiations. Though hopefully Rain and Tann will be able to secure the SC position via the momentum they have but well Dooku is a canny operator so we’ll have to see.

Maximus

I wish you the best of luck. If you don't mind the question, what are you studying?

Maximus

How is she playing into his hand? I mean, yeah sort of. Resetting the board and stuff. But he wants to keep the war going and let the Republic dismantle itself. Otherwise he would have held the speech, Padme held. Tann will most likely get elected. And when that happens, a ceasefire plays into Rain's and Sev'rance's hands. They need time and peace to consolidate their power base and prepare an offence against the two puppeteers since Rain is telling them everything now, it seems. As it looks, everything is coming up Rain. I do hope the author doesn't throw some random spanner in the works next chapter. If it's a reasonable spanner though, I'll acquiesce.

Delakar

Great chappy, first thought was "The War is Over." Well that won't last... After all its not called Star Peace....

Armo

Wait, so Rain’s about to tell Barriss and Tann about Sidious? Now that would be a power move!

Parker Groseclose

It would be hugely ironic if Padme’s speech sabotaged all of Rain’s efforts

Aeden Emrys

Good luck and thanks for the chapter!

Robolo42

Holy shit mates, you thought the pan was hot, try this boiling water and iron. Winning wars? Easy. Winning Peace, may as well jump mate. All your plays for the next fight are out the window, gone mate. Swimin in an ocean, now try swimming up a waterfall. No big military needed now lol.

Confused

Ah so the battle was won nice! But now Rain and friends have to win the political battle before Dooku can reset the board. Which is why he’s pushing so hard for a vote to happen while panic is still present in the parliament. Now if it’ll be enough is the question or if Dooku will stop it. And Padmé gets a scene! Love seeing her! Of course now she’s playing into Palpatines hand with her peace initiative so there’s that.

Mithras131

Best of luck on your exams!

Elaine

good chappie

Arthur Ibanda

Great chapter

Mr. Bigglesworth

"Only weapons are new. Yet it is not the weapons, but the men who handle them, who win victories."

Mad Max

Now that was... something.

Quentin Johnson

Thanks for the chapter!

elsicava

Early chapter. It's exam season right now, and I need time to study. Don't expect a chapter on Sunday. Thank you for your patience and support.


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