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Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2023-12-15 08:11:33 +0000 UTC

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Ivy Hedera

I so want to see Barris and Luminara's reunion. I can't wait for the next couple of chapters

Andrew

Saw Guerrera and his sister are the most likely insurgents

Just Graham

I'll pass.

elsicava

Honestly, just read Chapter 14 again and come to your own conclusion.

Chad Champion

I think he was just using your phrasing, but you do you.

Just Graham

Not according to the authors comment above. He says they were bombs.

William M.

As detailed in earlier chapters, they were tracking devices, not bombs. Its why he let her wander free on the Wheel. Apparently they may have doubled as restraining devices, but that's also not a bomb.

EnderScroll

With the confederacy loosing so much territory it sounds they are going need a serious offensive if they are going to survive. Even despite all of rains shenanigans.

Mrsean22

Well Rain got lots of work to do. Made some good deals with the Techno guy while making the planet a industry area along with the planets near by. Helps them joining the CIS connections the North and South territories. Rear Admiral huh? Little surprised he wasn't made Admiral but eh just one rank short of it. And hey Rain gets to go home to deal with some unrest and the negotiations.

Flash Red

Likely saboteurs from multiple factions if what Tann said about many separatists worlds/systems refusing to cease hostilities is true. The republic is likely in the same situation as well.

Rune Shadow

Well things are about to get interesting in the very worst sense of the word for our main character. Who do we think is going to show up to crash the negotiation? Grievous or maybe Ventress? If it is Ventress I do believe are main character has quite a good chance of turning her to his side. She does have her own sense of ideals that can be appealed to.

arnumart

Maybe the SI will be able to get Saul Guerra and his sister as officers.

Just Graham

Okay

elsicava

No, he took *out* the bombs. They were already in there.

Just Graham

Did our main character just put bombs inside of a kid? Edit: Nevermind the answer seems to be that he did earlier and is now removing them. I am not cool with reading a story from a POV of someone willing to do that and therefore am leaving. Great writing though, best of luck.

Avdrdr

What about the Jedi monitoring of suspects. They decided to do that and we haven’t seen anything since.

tianzigamer X

I can't wait for the main characters e.g Padme, Anakin, Obi to finally meet with Rain.

tianzigamer X

Well seems like Rain will need to fend off Grievous (or other Saboteurs) for the Peace Talks.

twentytoo

As much as I love space battles I love political drama even more. Let the duel of words commence

NostalgicTime

Ohh shit, set up for meeting the Jedis during the peace summit/conference? Potential meetup with Canon relevant Jedis and future Rebel commanders. Padme, Mon Mothma, Bail Organa, and other important Jedi figures like Anakin, Obiwan, and etc. Would be interesting to see their reaction towards the guy who has engineered so many of their defeats and their current biggest Jedi loses. Each Chapter just makes me want moar.

Kyle Pemberton

Will be interesting to see how Rain manages the political manoeuvring.

Joshua Graham

Love this chapter

Kana

Thanks for another great chapter. Back to Alderon we go! Tann is still just my favourite by far.

Elaine

good chappie

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