Patrefans
Mirrthful from patreon
Mirrthful patreon

Chapter 36

🕑 Added 2023-12-31 08:28:27 +0000 UTC

Comments

EnderScroll

Rain: “Skywalker, we meet at last. How’s the wife?” Anakin: *sweating bullets*

DarkNebula999

I love the integration of all the weird Onderonian lore from the EU. While the Onderon arc was good in Clone Wars, the planet was kind of bland in comparison. It’ll be interesting to see how Rain deals the Gerreras and the other rebels. It might easier with Steela still being alive.

Isley

good chappie

syu

Pretty sure Rain only watched the mainline Disney movies, so he knows jack about the clone wars cartoon and other such materials

Mirrthful

Yes, personal fiefdoms ruled by noble houses or the other. For example, the House of Kira's Kira Fortress. However, they are so irrelevant compared to Iziz that the galaxy don't even know they exist. I should probably chang 'civilised world' to 'galaxy'

FuschiaKnight

Asking for clarification here, the first line of this update says "Iziz. The oldest, largest, greatest, and perhaps the only city of Onderon, as far as the civilised world is concerned. But there were more–many, many more–hiding away in the impenetrable wilds of the planet. " However, in chapter 12, Rain's internal narration says: "He didn't. Because a bloc of moderate officers reasoned that purging Iziz would only prompt the other cities of Onderon to revolt in the name of their Lords, plunging the planet into civil war." To be clear, Rain is saying in the top that there are other Onderonian cities, cities ruled by families *such as* the Bonteris, just that the rest of the galaxy doesn't pay attention to them, right? Rather it just being Beast Rider settlements in the woods? Thanks!

Kana

Happy New Year, thanks for another great chapter. Getting glimpses of Rain's backstory is the best, and i love how he hasn't mentioned any specifics about the rebels, i would much rather he didn't really know anything specific. It's going to be fun when the Republic and Confederacy get there and see a united Onderon.

Aeden Emrys

Happy New Year!

Null

Space wizard harry!

elsicava

thanks for the heads up. Leal isn't a typo, it's the leal as in loyalty.

Maximus

Happy new year!

Maximus

Yeah, with wizards and magic and shit.

Lebowski

Best wishes for 2024! Edit suggestions: “actually, two attendants were frantically unfurling the pale purple and teal of my house just as marched past. -> just as we marched past “You have demonstrated your world’s might and leal to the galaxy, and return wreathed in glory as the pride of Onderon! -> might and zeal

Mrsean22

Well Rain is starting out strong by getting his home planet army and Space Navy on his side quickly by just moving the droids out of the City. Best part at least for the current king is it didn't cost him much and made him look good while doing it. Now Rain got to get everything set up and deal with the rebels on the planet somewhere in the wilds. Lord Admiral huh? Honestly sounds like a pretty cool title.

Vg7

Happy new year!

Flash Red

This was the best! The world building as you described Onderon was simply magnificent!

Markus

Star Wars is a fantasy story that masquerades as sci-fi.

Matthew Lo

Happy New Year! Thanks for the chapter.

windoverwaves

Happy new year!

windoverwaves

Most of those are probably from Columex.

Sekander

I‘m wondering who the POWs are. Does he still have some prisoners left over from Cristophsis or did they make some on Columex? I assume they are not talking about the rebels as they wouldn’t be POWs and they mentioned in an earlier chapter that they plan on releasing prisoners as a show of good will.

Vital

Man, Rash is such a blowhard. I pity all the people who have to deal with him. Anyway, exciting to see glimpses of Bonteri's backstory, and excited to see how they deal with Guerrera and the Rebels. Thanks for the update!

Rune Shadow

Happy New Year, always fun when Star wars cosplays as game of thrones

Parker Groseclose

Happy New Years! I love the world building for Onderon. The crazy monster creatures and factions are awesome. Are the peace talks going to happen on the planet or in orbit?

Dcs5782

Everyone hates ot unless they need the money

tianzigamer X

Happy new year!

elsicava

Sci-fi? No, we are medieval fantasy now. Also, happy new year's everyone!


More Creators