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Chapter 39

🕑 Added 2024-01-21 13:00:59 +0000 UTC

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Ansordia

I could YES.... But that wouldn't be a physical copy and my HANDS need a physical copy like how Primal Hunter or Azarinth Healer did it.

Viking

you can download it using https://fichub.net into a format that you can add to many bookcase apps or websites, or even just save into pdf

Ansordia

I have to say... I NEVER read Fanfiction... like I allways said if someone told be read some HP/LoTR/SW fanfic I told them I would never subject myself to that... and here I am breaking my own commandments... FUCK is this story amazing I basicly "binged" the whole thing in the last three days. NOW I'm pissed as I usually am that I don't find these stories "finished" and have to wait for it being finished well that's life I guess... never can I have a finished story but this is SOOO good that I really would love to have it on my bookcase for later rereads but as I have NEVER read or even looked into how fanfiction's function is that even possible? ALSO question how come the jedi mention that Rain's face is all mested up... but basicly don't talk about it ESPECIALLY after it's mentioned that nonforce sensetives don't experience such fenoma... would it be SUSPICOUS as hell? (currently my only gripe) , maybe Barris story line aswell but it's probbably me not understanding something.

Quentin Johnson

“How did scores of Dreadnaught crushing mass drivers get assembled and disassembled within hours?” Lol they’re hiding in plain sight, probably just switched to cleanup afterwards

Maximus

Yeah, I'm guessing a "say" is missing.

Lebowski

“Let’s just Governor-General Weblin and Governor-General Trachta would have never allowed it,” Isard said

onefaraday

plot armor & named characters don't typically die. Given that this is (technically) a Clone Wars fanfic, Rex kinda played a big role.

THE ONE ABOVE ALL THE LIVING TRIBUNAL

He has been able to choke dooku before from different systems, not to mention that sidious has the power to mentally snare billions

Conor lennon

I imagine Dooku was feeling like telling his master of a long list of failures would be bad for his health lol. Might be trying to salvage the situation before telling him lol.

Arthrus

I wonder how the Bulwark Fleet at Foerost will handle the Victory Fleet. With the war having changed slightly, the Separatists may actually defeat the Victory Fleet if they are just going to be fed there piecemeal. Defeat in detail as it were. I wonder how this might backfire on Palpatine when an entire Confederate Fleet full of battlecruisers is running amok.

Anareth

I doubt it. Palpatine is stronger than Dooku, but not that much stronger.

Voligne

I wonder if Palpatine is going to force choke Dooku from the other side of the galaxy.

William M.

I am continually confused as to why anyone would think him alive.

Parker Groseclose

Doku’s test is probably going to be getting rid of Ventress, which will be interesting since it’s happening earlier than in the cannon.

Parker Groseclose

Probably trying to cover his own ass

King Henry V

So Palpatine is unaware of the changes in the CIS, what has Dooku been doing that he didn’t inform Palpatine?

PearsMan

Nice chapter. Great to see hints of how the republic is slowly transitioning to the empire. Social media even in clone wars heavily portrayed the Jedi n a bad light (see Godzilla-monster episode where they brought it to coursant and it rampaged, you can see news blaming Jedi I think). Palpatine has like a billion plans prepared way before any of this happened (wasn’t it a situ plan in the making for decades?) so nice to see he just needs to slightly nudge things for damage control to be done. A but scary too cus how exactly do you stop that? I’m surprised the MC isn’t also preparing a hidden planet with a bunch of droids in reserved cus why not when u know what’s coming.

Null

Hopefully it's just a diversion from rain and all that preparation its for just a bunch of cargo ship instead of warships so they can blame the chancellor office for exaggerating this danger. I hope the MC can finally be the one in the shadows, planing, instead of the cliches of them always fight a losing battle.

N0T0B0K

Fairly certain that he's dead, be we can always hope that he still lives.

NostalgicTime

I'm confused.

Klatue

I must know is Rex alive and if not when is the new chapter 😔

Mrsean22

Palpatine doing what he does best. Scheming to get more power. Not surprised that Republic military is getting more centralized that happened to be going to Palpatine. The Republic military was getting a little bit out of control and maybe doing too well. Though Palpatine is seriously considering testing Dookus loyalty to the cause and even thinking about replacing the Head of Republic intelligence. All because of Tann surviving and getting the Supreme Commander position. Tann is certainly getting to work on getting control over the military with Parliament support being strong for it. Then we have Palpatines plan to restart the war. Sending ships to a important CIS plant. Which would give both the Republic and CIS reason to blame the other side. Republic say the only sent ships there but wasn't going to attack. While the CIS will say the Republic was obviously going to attack why else would they send ships there? Pretty clever of Palpatine if it works.

Armo

Oooooo, Palpatine’s scheming! Palpatine testing Dooku is going to be interesting. An attack elsewhere would catch Rain off-guard, though maybe Separatist intelligence would spot the buildup.

Maximus

The sentence mentioning the two Governor-Generals not allowing something doesn't make sense, I think. I'm not sure.

Maximus

Should be: I scratch your back


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