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Chapter 40

🕑 Added 2024-01-27 15:00:13 +0000 UTC

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Fred Johnson

that's a reasonable course of action for us, but we know Anakin a lot better than rain does. what Rain's seen is: in movie 1 - a punk kid. in movie 2 - him disregard orders, and slaughter an entire village. in movie 3 - flip out and genocide an entire culture. Very reasonable for him to not trust Anakin at all

tibbish

Yeah this. Just make sure Obi Wan is in the same room and can over hear things. Obi Wan can make Anakin listen to reason and do the smart thing. Otherwise it'd be begging for disaster.

SureRuseUser

Edit suggestions: and you don’t survive for weeks in the wilds if without learning quickly. and you don’t survive for weeks in the - wild - without learning quickly. ----------- an honest-to-God civil war was perhaps just above the paygrade. an honest-to-God civil war was perhaps - still - just above - my pay grade - . ---------------- Drexls had poor eyesight, and frozen as statues they could only hope it would sense their presence with its disgusting feelers. Drexls had poor eyesight, and frozen as statues they could only hope it - wouldn't - sense their presence with its disgusting feelers.

Docnox

I personally would prefer if he flips the board and calls Anikn now. Fills him in on the entire situation, nothing left out. And just asks him to protect the prisoner exchange. Its a small ask that matches anikn’s own preference.

Mrsean22

Well House Kira planning to overthrow the current king and got other houses to join them. Including the rebel group of Saw. Rain does has certain things going for him even though the General tricked him into this. And hey people wanting to go with him because learning modern skills is gonna be fun once off planet. Do like the uplift of Onderon is doing its thing on getting people to continue the uplift, start going out into the galaxy and even start getting a navy.

Octaeon

Of course not! It just so happens that the one paying Rain's wage is Rain himself. If he decides that Rain is due for a raise and a bonus for overtime, then Rain has every right to pay Rain more!

SpaceFan839

Let see what components we have. We have the rudimentary beginning of a external warp drive, properly trained droids, active starship research, and now people to design and man the new ship class. We could be looking at a developing game changer for the Separatists and the rest of the galaxy.

Monty

Oh hey, that whole "no loyal and competent senior officers" issue seems to have solved itself.

Monty

I don't think it's embezzlement if the hours being clocked are legitimate.

Rune Shadow

Yeah that's why I gave it so low odds of it working but the force is like a bad fanfiction writer when their pots won't work they try to ham fist it

William M.

If he hadn't already been told this was Padme's idea I would agree. As it is though? I could see Anikin defending the peace summit. Maybe he would support the rebels later, after the summit, but right now he has to know it would make Padme angry.

H.H.W

I CALLED IT. I FUCKING CALLED IT. *Something* was going on with House Kira. Lots of signs that there was more going on behind the scenes than we were privy to. Not showing their royal colours in the capital, not heeding king Sanjay's summon, beast rider shenanigans etc. Now it only remains to see how many of the other clans they can marshal to their cause. Oh and imagine the fallout if the Republic delegation finds out about the bloody civil war going on in Onderons backyard.

Null

Thanks for the chapter And again the MC it's in the back foot, hopefully he just straight tell the general that if they take one wrong step that planets it's going to need a new army since they are going to disappear in ashes with civil war and all.

TyrTheFallen

I wonder if we will have a favorable ending to this summit since i don't see how Rain will be able to do much when everything is blowing up around him.

Rune Shadow

Nice to see things starting to kick off, I'm betting 60/40 that Anakin takes the bait and tries to help the rebels

Flash Red

Two chapters a week! Your spoiling us hard and we like it!

elsicava

Does it work like that? Isn't that called embezzlement?

Kana

Now thats exciting.

windoverwaves

Poor Rain. Actually, with the state the Confederacy Military was in right now, could he just pay himself overtime?

Maximus

I second that

Loah

I've never liked Saw Gererra. He's an egotistical asshole and a terrorist and I've always seen him as nothing more than a violent thug who happens to be on the "right side". It makes sense that he'd try to prevent a peace initiative, and I'm glad that he's portrayed as uncaring of the bigger picture because it shows how much of a dickhead he is.

Jaxer30

Wonderful chapter! No rest for the wicked for our poor rain lmao

Mad Max

Talk about a FUBAR situation.

Mad Max

No worries about the extra, mate. If it comes, it's a pleasant surprise. Else, we alway tune in to our regularly scheduled program on Sunday :-)

elsicava

Next chapter in two or three days, and hopefully another after that on Sunday or Monday. That way Patreon will be two releases ahead of everybody else. No promises though ;)


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