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Chapter 41

🕑 Added 2024-01-29 01:08:44 +0000 UTC

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RedPine

That line about evil bills paving the path for evil bills, even if they are initially vetoed, is spot on to IRL. I grew up thinking cartoony villains were unrealistic, but ive since learned reality is far more wild.

PearsMan

I wonder what’s gonna happen when anakin meets the children of the force. When the light died (will it still go to Ashoka?) the sith got stronger (for a bit?), we didn’t really see what that meant because we were inside the bubble. But with sith being on our MC side and being against him. I wonder what this means

Enkelados

I hate to say it, but this was for me the weakest chapter yet. The perspective of Yoda and pearl clutching of Palestine is completely unbelievable. I also don't see what this chapter adds to the narrative.

Mirrthful

It's the door in the face technique (that's actually what it's called). Pretty simple, pretty effective.

Voligne

It's such a fascinating negotiation tactic Palpatine does. He presented to Bonteri and to Yoda a maximalist situation, and then walked it back to what he actually wanted. Presenting his desire as the desirable compromise.

Mirrthful

Palpatine is Canonically very good at hiding his presence. This chapter was literally adapted from a Legends book by Karen Miller, Clone Wars: Wild Space. Old Palps does actually have plot armour on his side. It's called the Dark Side. He interacted with Yoda and the Jedi for years and nobody suspected him at all. It was only in the last year of the war, in the novel Labyrinth of Evil did the Jedi nearly expose him, by a hair's breadth. And it wasn't thanks to the Force, but due to one of Palpatine's incompetent subordinates accidently leaving a paper trail for the Jedi to follow.

SusshiRoll

I never been a big fan of Star Wars but read this because of space battles and alien politics, and well it's very good writing. What confuse me this chapter is, did Yoda not sense anything in the force? Don't tell me it is due to plot armor. With Palpatine and Yoda so close to each other, did he not sense anything wrong with him at all?

Kinggoldcatter

Your on a roll !!!!

SureRuseUser

Edit suggestions: One this was for certain; the Republic did not have the resources to assault an armed orbital structure of this calibre. One - thing - was for certain; the Republic did not have the resources to assault an armed orbital structure of this calibre.

Rune Shadow

I stand corrected, it's a shame that they wrote Yoda like that but I concede the point.

Mirrthful

So I was thinking, what does Yoda think of Palpatine? I wouldn't know. So I cracked open some my old Clone War era books (Legends) like Wild Space to check out Yoda-Palpatine interactions... and basically ripped off the scenes.

Rune Shadow

This chapter was a little hard for me to read, I mean it's a masterful display of Palpatine's acting ability but I feel like Yoda was entirely passive in this chapter he could have been swapped out with any other Jedi with no difference, also a little bit too completely convinced in Palpatine's good nature. I thought even in the early days the Jedi had reservations over his power creep

The Golem Crafter

When this blows up in Palpatine face(hopefully) I'll be a happy man

WW

Ingenious, what seems to be giving away control to the media to an third party board is just an illusion. Most likely he has pawns on said board that will listen to him. It also upholds his image of being a fighter for democracy by showing he is fighting all these executives powers being given to him. And! If anything were to mess up, he has no ties in it. It won't be his fault but the fault of the board. Which can then be disbanded and merged into his executive powers. And everyone knows the Republic is corrupt, what is to stop this board from passing this information to a couple of trigger happy Admirals? Awesome chapter! Keep up the amazing work. Absolutely loving this.

Mrsean22

OK that was pretty genius of Palpatine. His advisors offer the very controlling of the media option while having the Jedi and more democratic Senators look for a compromise solution that makes him again reluctantly accept because of course Palpatine loves democracy soooo much. Now probably need to read it again to really understand how much power Palpatine got with the compromise but even if it's not much currently it's probably gonna lead to more control of the media easily in the future.

Null

Thanks for the chapter

DarkNebula999

After that performance, I bet Palpatine would qualify for their galaxy’s equivalent of an Academy Award. I guess by surrounding himself with hawks it’s that much easier to look like a dove in comparison.

Voligne

A brain aneurysm is an interesting thing. A person can die so quickly that before you realize anything has even happened, they are dead. They can die so fast they are dead before their body even hits the ground, like a puppet with its strings cut. The Republic has died a long time ago Master Yoda, we just havent hit the ground yet. Are you ready for the resounding crash? Is the Jedi Order all buckled in yet? No? Shame.

Reign

wow this is great

Man-O'-War

This was a great chapter but I can’t wait to see the Jedi reactions to Barriss coming back beyond plo

Quentin Johnson

Horror is my only reaction throughout this chapter, what a rough spot to be in for the Jedi and good ppl of the Republic, when they have to navigate around this

Desalis

Palpatine must be laughing so much on the inside, he has everyone eating from the palm of his hand.

Kana

Its unfortunate to see Yoda be so blind

Ansordia

My happiness is immeasureble and my day is brightened!

twentytoo

woohoo


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