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Chapter 29

🕑 Added 2023-11-12 16:43:15 +0000 UTC

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tibbish

Yeap. Adds a heap of believability and reality to the story since IRL modern warfare focuses on logistics heavily. Seeing Bonteri pull off some wins using that would be great

tibbish

Yessss this is the way!! I can only image Dooku and Palpy screaming at eachother in disbelief and WTF just happened

Bishop7053

It'd be hilarious if grievous pops out of hyper space directly into a giant fuck off rail gun asteroid and just dies instantly. Really fuck with dookus plans l. Just mention it in like one sentence and just never bring him up again lol

SusshiRoll

"IT'S A ROCK!"

OBS

Yall are forgetting about the anti jedi Droids, sure their somewhere around.

Jacob

This feels like it's gonna be epic, my bet is on grievous murdering Tann, or at least attempting too, but getting caught in the act, thus scuttling his promotion.

tianzigamer X

Building suspense for the grand battle. I wonder how many from the Republic will die... especially jedis.

da Finnci

Grievous arrives with impeccable timing, to save the Seperatist forces from certain defeat and turn around the battle ... wait ... why is the Republic fleet already gone and why are so many rocks here?

Quentin Johnson

Imagine if the Republic gets defeated by simple rocks 😂

Maximus

I'm very much looking forward to seeing the Republic once again thwarted by one of Rain's master plans.

Maximus

Unless Tann finally makes it.

Kana

awesome, thank you

Mrsean22

I knew it!! Well not completely but got it mostly right. Knew the Commonwealth were talking with Dooku but didn't know who exactly. Simon basically played a stupid game and got a stupid prize. Well congrats Simon the Commonwealth got the most ships but now you need the ships lost from the Coalition because surprise you are still outnumbered. Got a bit of respect for Diedrich because he's realizing what is at stake and knows Simon's plan got them bad PR. Well looks like Rain is coming up with a plan to face the Republic fleet that will include Anakin and Obi-Wan in this battle. And hey a Corp commander is actually being useful by helping make this plan visible. Now guess the question is will Tann and Grievous show up and if so in what way?

Hailhound

Awesome to see logistics vessels and especially those epic FCSVs getting some time in the spotlight. Logistics is way too neglected in Star Wars.

Rune Shadow

I have a feeling both Grievous and Tann are going to show up at exactly the same time for maximum chaos

Armo

I feel like the overall picture, without the Republic throwing a number of new fleets into the picture, is tilting towards the separatists. All of this planning is not taking into account the Malevolence, too! The mention of the Jedi padawan is nice. Maybe Vinnoc could convince Rain to let her go? I could see Rain letting her act as a one-time messenger to the Jedi Council. Thank you for the chapter!

Elaine

good chappie

steve

Wait.... So this battle is obviously setup to give grievous a big victory... But it sounds like rain may lessen his impact quite a bit. Still, dooku's obviously manipulating things in the background, so if grievous even appears in the battle, it may be enough for dooku to wrestle a pr victory

Jacob

Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next.


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