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Chapter 46

🕑 Added 2024-03-10 13:15:34 +0000 UTC

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Ryan

I love your series, Keep up the good work! I read the entire series in 1 day and I am not disappointed. May the forc... Never mind you got this.

Hailhound

Why do I feel like “I trust you” is basically code for “I love you” to them

Nil

Will probably escalate into casual bromance, followed by 8 weeks into causal brognancy. But luckily its all professional. Just what bros do with bros.

Voligne

I am asking: Are there Lucrehulks? Providences? Recusants? Munificents? If so what kinds?

windoverwaves

Nah, those two are stubborn about "not trusting" each other (they def do lol)

windoverwaves

And a lot of that aren't typical Separatist ship types. It's the same ships Rain worked with back in the parliemen

windoverwaves

Thirty battleships, twenty-three battlecruisers, thirty-six heavy cruisers, seventy-five destroyers, one-hundred fifty-one frigates, and five auxiliaries

arnumart

I think Calli is going to die or get captured.

PearsMan

Yeah valid, but if his friends tell him it could be another asset against their enemies

Robert Krol

Jesus, Calli and Rain need to just fucking commit to being in a relationship already. They clearly have stupid chemistry lol

Aaron V.

We are possibly about to see a huge plot divergence from cannon and I'm hyped to see it. Can't wait to see if Duku still wants to kill Ventress here and whether or not his attempt will succeed this time.

Helios

Just googled the “Inexpugnible” class battle-ship, and I’ve gotta say, if it’s the ship that’s showing up in the search, it’s really cool and I want one.

Maximus

Who could? His own allies with the force are few and wouldn't admit to that weakness and the Jedi are notoriously difficult to talk to for Rain and probably wouldn't want to expose that weakness either.

Maximus

Thank you for the chapter. It was great!

Voligne

What ships are in the 28th exactly?

Noob

Tftc

Maximus

Just a small edit: the verb of provocation is provoke.

Aeden Emrys

Thanks for the story so far! Really going to be interesting to see how our MC's current missions/objectives are going to turn out!

One_of_U

Wonderful, as always.

Mrsean22

Well Rain and Calli are preparing for what us basically a suicide raid into the Core while making sure they don't lose too many ships before they can even do said raid. At least for Rain because needs to help with a campaign. Rain and Ventress finally meet again. Ventress wants to attack which does have some sense but Rain can't because orders and strategic reasons. Though Rees Alrix not attacking does raise questions. Might be she can't or just waiting for reinforcements. Rees Alrix is someone to be careful of because of the Hundreds Days Campaign that Rain points out.

William M.

When she gave fleet movements to Doku during the Perlemian Defense. Movements that were then transmitted to the Republic.

elsicava

286th, sorry about that.

will shumway

Wonderful chapter! Does a great job setting up the next few chapters.

windoverwaves

Way I see it, they do trust each other somewhat, but are being stubborn

windoverwaves

Nitpicking: “Very good, General–” we shared a salute, “–I shall we see you at Yag’Dhul.” Without the we, surely “We’re going to be rendezvousing with Commander Ventress, and that means strolling right past the enemy. If Alrix presses, you decline. If she presses harder, the Fourth will assist you. Prioritise the safety of the Sixth above all else.” “Mirror the Third on our transverse plane at all times. If Alrix attacks, prioritise the safety of the Sixth above all else.” Do you mean the Seventh, as in the 287th Aux under Jorm? "The 28th Mobile had been divided into seven subformations; the Third and Fourth were Battle Divisions, and the Sixth was Commander Jorm’s Auxiliary Division, flagged by Aurora II" "namely Commander Jorm’s 287th Auxiliary Division, consisting of five lumbering mobile shipyards." Ah, inconsistencies here

PearsMan

Great chapter! When did the Calli betray and how did trench know about her interested in him. We never got an answer just that he did? It’s an interesting relationship since there’s no “trust” but lust? Trust in quotations because they’ve helped each other out a lot more than one would normally. Im surprised that no one has told our MC that their difficult to read in the force yet


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