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Chapter 51

🕑 Added 2024-04-10 15:39:27 +0000 UTC

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FuschiaKnight

Actually, a thought occurs--Tann and Trench assume the Republic is sending all their reserve armadas out of the Core Worlds--but they don't know about the Deep Core reserve armada, the Shadow Hand Fleet. Could this be a potential wrinkle in their plans?

Voligne

Be my guest. :)

NyaaMe0w

I know it's unlikly but I would like Alrix to survive the battle and be taken as a prisoner/hostage along a grand tour of the republic.

CB-Otaku

I wonder what Grevious is up to during all of this

Flash Red

“Anakin’s going to come after Rain personally probably,” I disagree with that, likely he’ll come after Horn Ambigene though the next time he meets Rain he will probably confront him about whether Rain knew about Ambigene’s plan to glass Eriadu. Rain: “Nope, I knew he was unhinged but not THAT unhinged!”

Enigma

Ya know, when it switched to Ambigene's perspective, I thought "Wow, what a drama queen, Trench. He's clearly matured into a reasonable guy". Then he glassed a planet. It seems the one who was wrong was me.

Hailhound

I think the author did a fantastic job conveying the horror of a populated world being glassed. It’s so different from the base delta zero on metalorn. There is no way to a sane person such an action is justified, and the knowledge that further horrors will be prevented is cold comfort. The Jedi debated over metalorn, a planet devoid of life, and only glassed it with great regret. Ambigene killed billions with tears in his eyes. It’s one of the things I love about the story, how grey and complex it is. How you can feel satisfaction for a “victory” and yet revulsion with the ally who engineered it.

One_of_You

Epic, this story is so well written, and keeps delivering.

Mirrthful

That's perfectly put. I kinda want to use it in the story. Can I?

Voligne

Its still an atrocity and a warcrime regardless of the justifications for it. That being said, there really isnt an equivalent to the geneva convention in Star Wars like there is here. That doesnt detract from the horror of what Horn Ambigene did though. Tann and Trench were perfectly happy to allow Horn Ambigene to do what he wanted to do because they wanted to try to terrify the Republic into letting the Sepratists go. They knew what he was about. Even though the CIS are the protagonists, none of these people are good guys. Trench is, was, a former corporate stooge who lead corporate forces in the activity of exploiting outer rim worlds and populations. I am sure he has gotten his hands dirty in the name of money before. Tann is a military authoritarian who wants nothing less than to lead one of the galaxies largest military institutions as if it were her own personal fief. Rain is an aristocrat turned military officer who cares only about himself and his own survival. Everything else is secondary. Ventress is a literal student of a Sith lord. Horn Ambigene is (in my minds eye) a skeletal, gaunt, withered lich of a creature who looks like he just woke up in some burial chamber and crawled out of his tomb just that morning. A callous, cruel, wicked wretch of a person who has been fighting a war against injustice for so long, he cares not against whom he perpetuates that injustice so long as his last breath is spent spitting at his hated eternal foe. None of these people are heroic. None of these people are good. Even as the people they lead in battle are the exploited unwashed common clay of the Outer Rim who cry out with one voice to shrug off of their shoulders the yoke of a distant and apathetic Republic who does not care how many of them die for the comfort and luxury of the core.

Voligne

I am imagining Horn Ambigene, because I wasnt able to find an actual picture, as some pale withered gaunt figure who looks like he just woke up and crawled out of some tomb to reach out his skeletal hand and reap the living. The withered flag is the finishing touch, him holding on to this ancient, battered, weathered old metal thing in a world of sci-fi shinyness, using it to give a toast to all of his dead comrades just before he slaughters seventeen *BILLION* innocent people. All he needs is a long black coat to complete the look and he is basically the incarnation of death.

BLauert

That's not how war works, if that strike brings a swift victory, it's justified

Aaron V.

Lmao it's so satisfying seeing Eriadu glassed considering what the Tarkins and by association the planet inflict on the galaxy otherwise in lore. Also it's just funny seeing Tarkins getting murked.

tianzigamer X

Well yes peace is gone but that doesnt make war crimes justified, if you want to be the good guy dont use means that are clearly evil. Dont kill innocents.

FuschiaKnight

Future general in the Alliance to Restore the Republic, Horn Ambigene, has just base delta zeroed Eriadu for being loyal to the Republic. While the context of Eriadu, the Rebel Alliance, and everything else causes it to make sense in context, the irony is still pretty fun.

Mirrthful

The Confederacy just attacked Coruscant, the capital of the Republic. There will be no peace, full stop. After 9/11, the USA flew onto a rage and will stop at nothing but the head of bin Laden, and that was two towers. The Bulwark Fleet just wiped several million people off the map. The peace initiative ended the moment the first shot was fired over Coruscant. In both Palpatine POV last chapter and Trench POV this chapter, you can see them both accepting 'peace' will only come when the other is wiped off the face of the galaxy. Operation Storm-Door and Operation Starlance, from the very beginning, was meant to terrify the Republic into submission by having three Separatist fleets rampage through the Interior and instill fear of god and death into the wealthy, decadent Core Worlds. It took five days for Eriadu to be glassed to a level Horn Ambigene found acceptable. Five days. And nobody stopped him. Because Tann and Trench realised that having a brutal wildcard such as him will terrify the Republic to such a level it might allow them to win the war. Can you imagine what the Republic is thinking? "The Separatists just slaughtered 17b lives in a single Outer Rim world. What will they do to us if they reach the Core?" And then Rain and Calli reach the Core, with the most veteran and vengeful fleets of the Confederacy at theit backs. Remember, their crews came from the Perlemian Front, which the Republic just brutally conquered.

Sekander

17b sounds like a lot but I don’t know if in the story people would think of it more like we did during ww2 after the firebombing of Tokyo. Eriadu is more akin to a medium sized city, Coruscant alone has probably on the order of 100b and more So I want to say, the glassing is deplorable and abhorrent but makes the CIS not irreconcilable with the Republic, depends fully on communication and what else will happen imo

Ryan

I think it would be neat but take away the character's strategic fight against the force. Having a "normal" man invites a level of coolness in it's own right. A man beating not only the chosen one, Sith lords, and corrupt politics, but the being of the universe itself with nothing more than spite and will. Not a power he was given to expand but a weakness to exploit.

syu

We know the Republic already authorized Base Delta Zero previously, but it's on a world with no civilians and only automated droid factories. CIS just glassed an entire world filled with civilians. While they might gain a mid term strategic win with Republic over reaction, I wonder what the long term play will be like now. Peace will be extremely hard to achieve now, the war will just escalate even if Palpatine is out of the picture.

William M.

Kinda wish this was posted on SV as well. This would be should be a shoe-in for their Pick-of-the-Month feature.

Matt White

New to the series. Love it.

John

I really want to know the extent of rain's force void powers ,he's an empty void of the force already, but now it seems to be spreading out to his surroundings with his fury, hell it would make it so much harder for jedi and sith to kill him in person if his very presence makes the force abandoned his surroundings, and it would also probably make a lot of them freak out , if you felt the force all your life and it left you and you couldn't contact it it would be unnerving to say the least! Puts them on a evener playing field cant wait till uses it to mess with the jedi.

Loah

Emancipation, the apocalypse. Holy hell

Mrsean22

OK this had just got intense. Tann and Trench plan is to go big now to hopefully end the war or at least hurt the Republic enough to make this war more even. Looking like it will work. Problem is Tann didn't account for Horn glassing Eriadu and underestimating his commitment to the CIS cause/ the Outer Rim. Rain is pissed and he's gonna let that anger out on Rees Alrix and the Core worlds. All the force users feeling Eriadu including Palpatine and Dooku who are gonna be angry on Palpatine part and a little fearful on Dookus part.

Fish man I don’t fish

Holy fuck the operation has barely started and shit is already going from 0 to 1000 already, hell I can’t wait until next chapter to see the reactions to this

Jmc mc

The hype is so good, f you alrix rain isn't even fighting you he's fighting an omnicidal "force" desperately trying to balance the scales like a flailing child. WOOOOOO!!!!

Felix

The chapter straight up tells us that Sevrance didn't realize that Ambigene would do that. The whole "glassing the planet" thing was not in their plans at all.

Armo

Oof, Rain’s going to feel like shit after that talk about not killing innocents he gave to Anakin. Even without that he’ll probably feel awful. Wonder what Tarkin’s gonna do now, if he survived - his planet’s functionally gone. He likely will lose a lot of influence. Anakin’s going to come after Rain personally probably, even if he did not order the bombing of Eriadu, with his hate for the Separatists fully unleashed. Maybe we’ll see the return of Jedi Warcrimes! Palps and Dooku are going to be really concerned now. I expected them to come to blows, but if they haven’t… Finally, the Jedi might not be able to stop fighting the Seps because of Eriadu’s huge death count. The only thing that might put them on the Seps’ side is Order 66, I reckon. Thank you for the chapter!

tianzigamer X

What happened to the peace initiative to live peacefully or at least coexist together with the Republic and Confederacy? Did Rain or Sevrance consider what will happen after their "offensive"? With Eriadu down, there wont be any peace ever with the Republic, it's either side annihilate each the other now... 17b dead that's why the Confederacy is the villain even if i like Rain.

Sean McClain

Suddenly the war has move beyond Palpatines control, it is now a monster that is off the leash.

Cesar gonzalez

And with this, the war has enters a new stage.

Husinay

What the Hell... With every chapter this become more and more incredible. In my head the lore of trhis story is slowly replacing the original one !

Null

Thanks for the chapter

Null

Shit hit the fan real quick..... And I am all for it!!!!!! 🔥 🔥

Empty Shelf

This was a brutal reminder that you don't need a super-weapon to destroy a planet...and you don't need a Sith Lord to commit an atrocity.

PrettyBoi99

Wow Ambigene is going full Taris glassing Eriadu. Who even needs Grievous when you’ve got this guy?

Kana

This chapter was amazing. No other words

Seajun Leung

Ah the crisp fresh smell of complete planetary genocide. Way to send a message.

SpaceFan839

There is and he hates Palpatine's guts, his name is Maul and he was Palpatine's apprentice in The Phantom Menace.

EnderScroll

“the final and greatest offensive” that’s ominous as f***!

Kinggoldcatter

Well that was a fun one. Who needs a death star I guess?

Mika Willems

Did Trench have a curly mustache during that speech? Because that was a prime mustache curling speech right there.

Akel

Holy hell that chapter was METAL AS F***

CB-Otaku

Anyone else re-read this with Mars, Bringer of War playing? Because I highly recommend it

Daniel P

You gotta love that this is basically the tarkin doctrine

Ryan

What a Master Piece! The Build Drama, The Rising Action, The Tension Brimming up. The Weightlessness Before the Fall. Oh and the Corpses of the Damned kick it off. I am losing my marbles. I will binge read the book again. *Sniff* It is not a problem....

Bishop7053

Holy shit, Horn just took palps plans and fucked them in the ass hard. That system was central to his plans for the empire, wiping out a huge number of the tarkins is also a massive blow to future competent officers for the republic. For a fanatic like Horn there is nothing he won't do for the separatist cause, and Severance just gave him everything he could dream of

JAMAJ

Maaaaaaan that was intense

Triangulum

Holy shit, if a piece of literature could be considered cinematic, then this would be at the very top of the list. Also, Horn Ambigene is a total beast, damn.

Quentin Johnson

Palpatine and Dooku: Is there another Sith out there?! 🙄

CB-Otaku

Oh wow... The CIS just dived headfirst into a Mandalorian Crusade level Offensive not even Sheev was expecting Fantastic stuff Mirrthfully!

Nathan Ganesan

Looks like Rain's force blank abilities are intensifying.

Man-O'-War

Oh an update YAY

Mirrthful

As promised (for those who read the message), here's the early chapter today. There will be another chapter on Sunday, as usual, but it might come a bit late, as in after the regular updates on SB and RR. Hope y'all don't mind. For now, hope everyone had a very pleasant Hari Raya, as we call it where I live. See you all in a couple days.


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