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Chapter 53

🕑 Added 2024-04-21 13:18:48 +0000 UTC

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NostalgicTime

How delectable would it be to see this secret fleet and the Open Circle fleet mutually destroy/maul each other through Bonteris machination? Unlikely as this would be, commandeering that fleet would be fine as well, probably split it into dozens of smaller fleets to wreck fear and havoc following Bonteri's trail of destruction. I'm uncertain with Ventress, we can kill her off or let her live as a trap/distraction/source of misleading information as a prisoner or as a prey being coralled to bait in Dooku. Or perhaps have her betray dooku and hand over that fleet to him, so many choices to choose from. Double agent? I just enjoy seeing plans fall apart for those who were always in control. A more even... and brutal playing field has presented itself to us and it will be glorious!!!

FuschiaKnight

Rain's concerns over the fate of the POWs he captured here in the Sullustans is another example of his speciesism, isn't it? While the Sullustan government that supported the Rebel Alliance is different institutionally and ideologically than the SoroSuub-bought and paid for government here, if his worries are based on the way "processing POWs" sounds in Sullustan I imagine the fate of GAR POWs here would actually be fairly bland.

FuschiaKnight

The Chimeratica I think is a Providence-class, destroyer rather than dreadnought variant (ie 1km length).

tianzigamer X

Omniscient is perhaps exaggerated, Palpatine is made much more competent than Dooku. Pal can fool the whole Jedi council with Yoda and co, even in setback like the Perlemian Coalition winning Columex and the peace initiative, he can turn it around. While Dooku can't reign in the CIS althought he has much more influence than Pal in the Republic? Doesnt Dooku also has the "dark side" so that he can sense his impending doom or rather Rain/Tann planning his downfall? Pal has plan A B C D, Dooku has only plan A and B...

PearsMan

I noticed that about your story. Everything follows great when you read it from the beginning, but when it’s chapter by chapter once a week people will forget the details n bigger picture. Makes for great reread.

Mike222

I think the real question is what's Rains sweet new Ride It said destroyer but like the word cruiser in Starwars that could mean anything from a Consular to a Viscount in size

SusshiRoll

Ventress betraying Rain? Lmao. Ventress now have a tasted power, true power, one where she felt like a god and handed by Rain, a non-force commander, on a jeweled platter. Dooku has just lost another disciple.

elsicava

Nobody's omniscient. This fic doesn't have an omniscient Palpatine. Everyone seems to have forgotten Palpatine wanted to test Dooku's loyalty. Everyone seems to have forgotten Palpatine has just spoken to Dooku.

tianzigamer X

Palpatine is made omniscient while Dooku clearly lower if not somehow even incompetent, well he is the teacher while Dooku is his student but both are 80+...

Delakar

Now remember boys and girls, every sith has at least one hidden fleet. I fully expect dooku to have at least one more maybe only a few dozen. Palpatine however he's probably got half a dozen hidden fleets.

wearMoniker

The recent vibe for Rain has been to learn to trust his subordinates. So, I wonder if he'll try to manipulate Ventress somehow... only for her to preempt the gambit by informing Rain that Dooku wants him and his lady friend dead. So it's like, is she really being honest? Is this a double layered mind game? And even if she's being honest, how much can he really put his trust in a legit Dark Sider?

KnightofTempest

Dooku still doesn't understand that the reason he was ousted was due to arrogance in his planning does he? You'd think he'd have reconsidered his strategies after being soft couped, but no. He's still using the same old means of contact even when his enemies are stuffed to the gills with intel ships. . .

Trailblazer

I think it's the other way around with Rain baiting the Storm Fleet into encountering Open Circle Fleet head-on, who is now busy dealing with Ambigene's fleet advancing on the Rimma. Rain jumps into Yag'Dhul > Storm Fleet reveals itself > Emberlene Warfleet draws as many Republic ships as possible into Yag'Dhul > Storm Fleet is battered and forced to retreat southward into Open Circle Fleet while 28th Fleet sneaks away early on

tibbish

This would be the way to play it. If he has enough knowledge of the betrayal planned for him by Dooku and Ventress he also has got the chops to pull it off too!

Ryan

That sounds like a good stratagem. Why fight two fleets when they can just kill eachother.

syu

Might I hazard a guess. Rain will jump to Yag'Dhul and lift the Siege slowly. Giving Anakin enough time to double back. All the while timing how fast he lift the Siege so Ventress will have enough time to go and drag the storm fleet out of hiding and collide directly with Anakin. In the confusion, Rain will then proceed to jump deeper into the core worlds. If he can cause a big enough scene and lure Fondor's or Mechis III's sieging fleet out, he could even lift the sieges there. Can't wait to see it play out.

EnderScroll

Oops got their names mixed up.

Ordic

Hearing of sev'rance tann* Calli is in Kashyyyk system right now, it's the pantoran who's getting the spotlight to dunk on dooku with this sweet transmission if it gets to her fast enough

SpaceFan839

To be fair, most of the galaxy had forgotten about the term: Operational Security. And the few people that understand the concept of the term are seen as competent.

EnderScroll

Oh boy, I think Duku just turned Cal Tirlim’s hearing on Raxus into his own. They now have all the ammunition they need to depose him. Assuming Rain forwarded that transmission.

Trailblazer

Oof, Ventress just exposed her conversation to Rain and the rest of the 28th Mobile Fleet, who wouldn't handle any talk of assassinating their very well-respected admiral to put it lightly. Worse for her, Rain knows exactly what he will encounter. It would be a second 7th Battle of Sullust, except the Storm Fleet is a worse one-trick-pony than Alrix. I think here is what going to happen: Ventress will be conflicted to fight Rain, especially when Rain proved to be the superior strategist over Dooku and the key to CIS success, but she will anyway. When they arrived at Yag'Dhul and Ventress meet up with the Storm Fleet, Rain will use the Emberlane Warfleet to double-blind them while Vinoc and Cortosis Droids board Dark Rival to capture her. If the entire thing succeed, Either Ventress will switch to Rain's side or stay loyal to her master to the very end and taking Vinoc down with her. All the while, Calli and Tann might be in a more grave danger.

NostalgicTime

The Sith seems to have forgotten the term: Operational Security. Having the force, while giving you a leg-up/advantage, doesn't really make you invincible or even that special. These are very dangerous foes to face normally, especially for cock sure dark siders.

Mrsean22

Oh that was a great chapter. Rain knows what Horn did was bad but only really caring how it effects his plans. And yeah Rain probably listened in and recorded that conversation between Ventress and Dooku. Rain either gonna get control of that fleet Dooku has or gonna do some trick so Anakin faces it instead weakening Anakins own fleet. Though we are seeing Ventress question Dookus decisions in her head. She is seeing that people like Trench and Rain could of been on their side if Dooku actually picked skilled military officers to lead instead of people that only listen to Dooku.

Null

Thanks for the chapter How kind of duku to gift a new fleet to our MC 😂

Bishop7053

Thanks for the gift dooku, 200 warships will be useful, and that definitely got recorded, so he is fucked politically now. Good times

Nil

Sufficiently staffed intelligence division is indistinguishable from the Force, it seems. Oh boy the space wizards are going to have a fit when Rain shows up at exactly the wrong place with the right men.

Kana

Rain and Cali getting an extra 200 ships i guess.

Confused

Ah so given rains intelligence division I'm betting he heard all that. And I'm also betting he's going to send subtle word to tann about it and probably steal those battlecrusiers for himself where he'll them wreck havoc in the core with. And I look forward to how he'll deal with ventress here as well.

One_of_U

I was thinking something similar as well, or at least a way to make this obstical obsolete.

Demonuss

This is great plan that won't completely show Dooku to be a traitor to the cause, and lose what little trust and control he still has over the Confederacy. Sith are really dropping the ball now that the game is no longer easy and simple.

One_of_U

That’s great, even fantastic. I can’t wait to see who betrays who, who outwits the other, and what truths we can uncover in the next chapter.

Maximus

He might turn her against Dooku or plant some seeds, since Dooku will inevitably betray Ventress and they don't see eye to eye on a number of issues.

Maximus

I am assuming Rain was able to listen in? And even if not, my admittedly still rudimentary grasp on the proceedings of this chapter leads me to infer that he is already aware Dooku will try something with that fleet and that Ventress was ordered to betray them. I'm just not completely sure whether he listened to that transmission and recorded it.

trilobite

So this conversation got recorded? This will be pretty awkward for Dooku.

Jon.

Who were the pillars of Sev’rance Tann’s regimed? Regime instead of regimed

axel jensen

i can hear admiral ackbards words from here. Ventress is about to commit a death star sized blunder. HE KNOWS and ventress dosen't know that so she's fucked

King Henry V

So in essence Rain is about to get his hands on 200 advanced warships lmao

Mad Max

Looks like Anakin is gonna face off against a substantially reinforced fleet. Or a very well-equipped rearguard.

Nathan Ganesan

The schemes do be scheming.

Dineshraj Dhandapani

Looks like the hammer is finally here for Rain.

Man-O'-War

Oh dear I guess we will see where her loyalties truly are


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