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Chapter 70

🕑 Added 2024-08-18 17:55:08 +0000 UTC

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masterpeng

Good to know! I didn't expect Rain to be honest to Plo Koon about all his forces returning. The numbers are still a bit wonky though as apparently "All the enemy vessels detailed in the fleet composition General Plo Koon had provided us are accounted for.” with <200 ships Unless the Mining Guild fleet didn't jump with Rain, which in my opinion doesn't make much sense because they would have been crushed by the Republic fleet if they stayed. So the repaired fleet with the Auxilliaries and Vinoc's division are unaccounted for from Plo Koon's perspective. Excited for next chapter :)

elsicava

Rain explicitly told Plo Koon to wait until all of his forces have returned to him, and in the faux battle itself he relied on the Givin to make the on-the-spot jump calculations to Rendili. So both the frigates and Wavecrests were with Rain. Vinoc was still campaigning in the Deep Core, and didn't have enough time to rendezvous, so he was given orders to guard the Nexus Route and flush out all remaining GAR elements in the region.

masterpeng

I thought I'd post my observations ahead of today's release as some commenters seem to think Rain jumped in with the entirety of his fleet, which is far from the truth. Frankly, I think Rain jumped in with exactly the ships he was willing to show Plo Koon. Let's break it down: > Before engaging the three fleets at Yag'Dhul Rain had 259 fighting ships (Ventress' 46th Guard fleet included) > After the battles (without the Guard Fleet) Rain had around 100 fighting ships, + 100 ships that can be resuscitated, +70 Wavecrest Frigates, + 50 Intelligence Frigates > For the standoff with Plo Koon in Empress Teta Rain had 162 fighting ships, excluding 51 ships that are with Vinoc. In chapter 68 it was stated "that left one-hundred sixty warships at our disposal for the upcoming engagement, having been supplemented by the Tetan Guard and Mining Guild Enforcement Fleet". Then in this chapter we know that the Tetan Guard had their 20 ships "turn on Rain" during the engagement with Plo-Koon. Thus I believe Rain jumped into Rendili with 162-20-10+51+1 = ~184 ships (subtracting the 10 droid ships which stalled the 20 Tetan Guard ships, adding Vinoc, adding one Wavecrest Frigate). Note that by removing the Mining Guild presence from Empress Teta the supplemented ships from the Mining Guild have no choice but to follow Rain. > Plo Koon didn't know about the remaining 69 Wavecrest Frigates, which have been exploring with the 50 Intelligence Frigates as beacons/relays. He also doesn't know about the Auxilliaries, which have been repairing ships outside the system. Pretty sure the author has purposefully not mentioned Commander Jorm since Yag'Dhul. My guess is also, that this is the reason Rain wanted some days of negotiation with the Jedi as well: to finish the repairs. With the engineering corps of the Givin, they probably have all the repairable ships done. > Thus I believe Admiral Honor and the Home Fleet are for a rude awakeing as 200+ ships are unaccounted for. > Disclaimer: I could be totally wrong and the numbers could vary as the author has often rounded numbers or been vague about some parts of the fleet.

Mr. Bigglesworth

How can the Republic forget about the gravity cannon setup so easily? Line up the opposing fleets and game over with the shot.

Jan Ullrich

As fare as I recall it’s the first major cliff hanger right before action And sometimes it’s good too.

Jan Ullrich

It has begun the start of the decent to villainy and madness. A new victim to the all mighty cliffhangers.

nugitoBambino

ohho that's a great idea. nice

DatCameraMON

Really don't like the cliffhanger here. Especially since we already had a setup cliffhanger chapter teasing the conflict here at Rendili.

N0T0B0K

well fuck, how’s Rain going to get out of this one. It feels too stacked against him now.

Sean McClain

Yeah, I don't think Rain didn't see the mine's coming. He knew, they knew he was coming.

King Henry V

Oh dear - ran the numbers from past chapters - that is entirely Bonteri’s fleet. The only hope has to be that somehow Bonteri can extract something from this mess.

King Henry V

Hmmm how large is the fleet under Bonteri?

Bishop7053

That'd be my guess too. Especially when she said that the fleet numbers is exactly what plo koon said it was, just seems like a surprise waiting to be sprung. Plus no pov from rain seems like next chap would be him showing up with a steel chair outta nowhere

Duke of Coffee

Hopefully...

D3ad0s

My money is on the Hydra ships being from Mining Guild. Destroy one enemy by throwing it in to another. Than proceed to ambush your opponent when they are busy destroying your bait

Mrsean22

Yeah this isn't looking good for Rain. Like Honor had advanced notice of Rain and where he would show up. The fact they are saying this is all of Rain's ships doesn't seem good. Do hope Rain has something up his sleeve or prepared for this but not sure how he'd do that.

Peter

Here's what I think. Plo Koon correctly reported the number of ships he encountered at Empress Teta. What Salima doesn't know, and perhaps Plo Koon doesn't know as well, is that Rain had more ships further in the deep core than the 200 reported (a quarter of the fleet under Vinoc). I think it is these ships are Rain's ace in the hole as they will enter Rendili later and/or in a different extract zone.

Marcin

It smells like a trap... especially the part "fleet composiotion is exactly what Plo Koon told us" is it forshadowing :D ?

Asharzal

Well that battle already started terribly for the Confederacy. Still, I refuse to believe that this will be the end of Rain and Calli. Even if they lose the battle, I am convinced that they will manage to escape. All the better if they manage to kill that arrogant twat Salima too, really don't like her.

Tsorov

Weren't there the 30 ships that left after Calli destroyed the fortresses with her asteroid rail gun? Where did they go? And where are Rains Auxilliaries?

Voligne

Cliffhangeeeerrrrrssssss!

NyaaMe0w

I wonder if Rain did some refurbishment on those captured republican vessels from Yag'Duhl and maybe the raids on Prakith/Nexus route. If there was a significant detachmant of Venators, ect., Rain might pull the old bait and switch.

Helios

That fact that a Wavecrest got destroyed is really telling that there's something going on, honestly. The Givin seem the type to act only with absolute or as close to as possible certainty in their movements. All of our characters in Rain's fleet have displayed a very high degree of competence in strategy, albeit in different areas depending on the individual. Anticipating that they'd be caught out by Interdiction mines is something I have absolute faith our team is capable of.

Jaxer30

You can't do this to us man. Another week :(

FuschiaKnight

Also, is the depiction of Calli vs Obi-wan supposed to be reminiscent of Cannae? Because if so, uh oh.

FuschiaKnight

I think it goes: Calli persuades Jace Dallin (Rendili SDF commander) and Dua Ningo to go for a breakout, knowing that would force a battle before the returning GAR reserve fleets join the siege, then Honor Salimas and Obi-Wan see that's her best play and plan to trap her in response, with Plo Koon's fleet joining in to jump on them, but then Plo Koon tells them he won't be there because he had to warn them that Rain is coming, so instead Obi-Wan's fleet goes for what seems like a Cannae-style double envelopment of Calli's fleet (can she break out before they're encircled?) while Honor Salimas yanks Rain's fleet out of hyperspace surrounded by her fleet.

Michael K

Oh good lord, this does not look good for our protagonists. And stopping on that cliffhanger?!?

Straven

Honestly was just lost trying to catch wtf was going on in this chapter.

Conor lennon

The cliffhangers are so painful. I assume rain has a plan to really fuck things up for honors fleet.

Kana

That's probably not him. Sacrifice ships once more?

FuschiaKnight

I mean, Rain's deal was over letting Plo Koon take Empress Teta; strictly speaking, if Plo Koon is aligned with Adi Gallia, her plan doesn't actually require that the CIS be doing well or that Rain survive, depending on how she plans on assembling her coalition.

FuschiaKnight

Looks like Rendili will be a major engagement that determines if the protagonists make it or not. The question is then , can we take everything that has happened at face value, or if there is something that has happened that we haven't seen yet that will make the battle shake out to be less one-sided. Assuming that Plo Koon is on board for Adi Gallia's plan, he and Rain are *technically* aligned in their goals, but strictly speaking Gallia doesn't actually *need* Rain to be alive or for the Separatists to succeed, and that applies to Plo Koon—which means that it may be possible that Plo Koon as done exactly what it seems he has done, and Rain has dropped unprepared into a trap he has no response for. On the other hand, information asymmetry and perspectives having limited information has been a recurring theme of this story, and it's possible that Rain may be aware and have his own responses in line that will ensure that the battle doesn't go as it seems to be going here. It's also possible that Plo Koon warning the GAR here rather than showing up on time is also partly due to some sort of arrangement with Rain; perhaps giving him warning in turn? Or ensuring he doesn't have to face an additional Jedi fleet at Rendili, but the situation Rain is in seems pretty grim regardless. Honor Salimas seems to think that advanced warning of Rain's fleet was worth the absence of all of Plo Koon's ships at the start of the battle, but the question becomes, is it? And if not, was that a calculated move? Plo Koon was instrumental to getting Jace Dallin to go loyalist in canon, maybe his absence is intentional to try and ensure that Dallin sticks with Calli's fleet? While its possible that Plo Koon's information on Rain's fleet composition was misleading, we know that Rain entered the core with only about that many ships; there's not much room to produce another head of the hydra from that. There's not many places Rain can get two hundred separatist warships to just sacrifice in a distraction play.

Dineshraj Dhandapani

Didn't rain make a deal with Plo Koon? I'm confused of Rain's plan right now. Is he really fine with letting Calli's fleet get pummeled!

Man-O'-War

Hopefully the next chapter is rain going “I’m not locked in here with you you’re locked in here with me” Whatever happens I can’t wait

Aaron V.

You know what they say about Hydra Heads and technically speaking that Hydra just lost.


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