Patrefans
Mirrthful from patreon
Mirrthful patreon

Chapter 74

🕑 Added 2024-09-15 18:29:45 +0000 UTC

Comments

PearsMan

This works perfectly with the image he built of him trying to push back against more power but alas the situation (he orchestrated) pushes him to just have to accept it, for the good of democracy

StarBat

Looking forward to Mirrthfully's answer, but I would think that It keeps Mind Trick/Force Domination off the table and keeps him from pinging precog intent scans and allows him to build his deck of cards vs having the enemy look through it at will. Seems like a fair game to me.

Voligne

Here is a question Mirrthfully: What was your reasoning for making Rain a force blank? Why not just make him a normal person who is trying to pry the CIS out of the grip of the Sith?

Voligne

It really puts the exploitation of the outer rim in a whole new light. I am surprised the Jedi never picked up on these unwholesome overtones for the war.

elsicava

That's how it was in canon. Republic propaganda framed the war as "civilised human Core vs savage alien Rim", setting the groundwork for later Imperial humanocentrism. Funny thing is, the 'core' of the CIS is the humanocentric Tion Hegemony. But yes, the CIS is majority alien, though humans are still the most populous species block.

Voligne

It occurs to me that the Republic right now is mostly human and human-descended planets and species, and the CIS, which is the Outer Rim, is mostly non-humans with humans in the minority. Is this incorrect?

Max

The newfound bustle of the Temple’s wide corridors were not lost on her as she made her way to the turbolift up to the circular chamber of the High Council, filled with thousands of Jedi Knights and Padawans recalled from far-flung frontiers to defend the Core from the recent Separatist incursion. This sentence makes it seem that the council chamber is egregiously overfilled. I'm not sure whether that was your intention. The way this sentence is phrased means that all those people are in the council chamber.

Jaxer30

Man, you spoiled my taste. I can't read another star wars fanfic without thinking about yours and how good it is.

Peter

The target might even be Tann; there were 3 possibilities mentioned this chapter

syu

I believe his target is Adi Gallia actually, as he mention she needs to go, now

Rune Shadow

Would be nice to see him get some agency and be a nice f-you to Palpatine's plans

M0och

Been reading the Novelization of Revenge of the Sith, and oh boy does it recontextualize much in this and the original story!

Rune Shadow

She may not be as powerful as Palpatine but she's been around for far longer, he will not buy her life cheaply and I'm sure she has several contingencies up her sleeves if she does die

PearsMan

I wonder how Palps plans to clean the CIS house in one sweep

nugitoBambino

I wouldn't be surprised if Sidious already planned for that. That is, as Adi say's in this chapter, getting anyone to believe /he specically/ is the sith lord is what he needs to prevent. Or thinks he does. If she dies, all the jedi will think it was the sith lord pulling his strings, and that the Sith Lord has a way of getting to corusent.. They'll be more confident he's some kind of patsy, instead of the key figure because "how could the supreme chancellor even find time to kill our jedi?". So Adi's plan is pretty high stakes, she needs to be bait, but at least, even if she can't win the fight, she needs to send evidence that Sidious is Palpatine specifically to the council so her death actually buys something.

nugitoBambino

100%. Classic politician move "I promise to..." then just ignore the issue or find a reason not to do it later

Kaywye

The correct move by Palpatine here would be to accede to their wishes and repeal the laws they mentioned, and then clandestinely orchestrate a terrorist attack some weeks down the line that those laws would have stopped, so that he can have a reason to re-institute those laws.

Mrsean22

Oh this is starting to get interesting. Adi and Palpatine planning. Palpatine no longer waiting and seems to be pulling the trigger. Senators asking him to give up power is a big deal. The dice has been rolled.

Sean McClain

I think our MC has been waiting for this, for Palpatine to leave as Sidous to kill Dooku. Reports of his death are greatly exaggerated.

Ника Ви

Thanks for the chapter!

Quentin Johnson

Oh dang I was thinking Palpatine was going for Tann, but if he’s going for Adi Gallia, things are about to get real interesting

Jarrik32

I can't help but feel that Sideous is closing the door after the horses have bolted. As not only are her suspicions shared by the council but her data and contacts have already been passed onto others. Silencing her changes nothing, especially as the last political chapter hinted that she is knowingly using herself as bait to lure out the Sith. She knew perfectly well that the meeting could never be kept secret after all.

Aaron Greene

Oh boy, the mole AND Palps starts his countermove. Interesting times ahead!

will shumway

I imagine that Adi galia would expect attempts on her life if she believes Palestine to be the sith Lord.... I wonder what she has planned in case such an attempt were to occur

BigBillyWilly

Holding out hope that Dooku has a faster realization that Palpatine views him as a disposable pawn than he did in canon.

Duke of Coffee

Hmmm let see what plan Paplatine cooked up, in light of the moving goalposts.

Trailblazer

And of course, Palpatine will not go down as easily and just as sly as he is dangerous. Like Tann predicted, it's decided on a knife-edge. The question is who's going to blink first?

Quentin Johnson

Well looks like Palpatine can activate Order 66 when he’s way out of fighting range. Let’s see if his transmissions can be stopped when it comes down to it 👀

uglyhorsE

It's getting spicy.

Cesar gonzalez

Let’s goooo

Apotheosis

oooooooohhh it's TIME

Man-O'-War

This chapter was so good. It really feels like we are in the beginning of the end. Also hopefully we learn the fate of cali next chapter Thank you for writing


More Creators