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Chapter 56

🕑 Added 2024-05-12 15:37:00 +0000 UTC

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milky

I get the impression that Adi Gallia is using what she considers disposable problems to do the dirty work. If they die then that just means she doesn't need to deal with them later.

Nadi_Naps

So Baris just connected ALL Coruscant Military Satellites to Handler One... The same Handler One that Calli is casually using as a paper weight/ stress toy... The same Calli who just invaded the Core regions and now has to wreak havoc while evading enemy fleets. Does Calli now have access to, once unencrypted ofc, to all republic military transmissions from Coruscant? Such as all ship locations, republic intelligence, and the current position of Admiral Ningo? If so, I can see why the General sent her political advisor into the core... Gonna take a hell of alot of political manoeuvring to bring Ningo onside, but if anyone could do it, it would be Calli.

William M.

I'm pretty sure she knows. She's just not too worried about it. I mean, Rain is the one who sent them off on this chase, so whatever it is can't be something that would endanger the mission. And I'm pretty sure she has a good handle on Barriss, so she knows she wouldn't do anything horrible. Heck, she could even be counting on having a back door channel to Rain.

Max

I'm just confused what the Jedi THOUGHT she was up to. I mean how many reasons can there be to carry a suspcious data storage device?

NyaaMe0w

I really like this chapter. Looking forward to detective Barris rooting out spies and trying to fix Bode and Iskat . Also Rain is in for a welcome surprise when he checks his intelligence network.

Trailblazer

Sister Sara is here, and she's launching a prank on the Republic. Homeworld Security will be technically correct to suspect Separatists' involvement, the best kind of correct.

Max

Just a minor thing because it's a relative niche verb but I believe the past tense of (to) cast is cast, not casted.

Ryan

Thanks for the birthday gift!!!!

Michael K

I'm so conflicted over this chapter. On one hand, great world building, intrigue, espionage, and Barriss! Interesting new characters, a great look outside our primary protagonist. On the other hand, have to wait another week to see how Rain gets out of that cliffhanger 😆

Mrsean22

Ok that was cool. Really felt like a spy mission. Barriss sorta got caught with the device but long it doesn't come out she's working for Rain/CIS she should be good. Really get to see what Bode and Iskat are like. Bode is a good spymaster got to give him that but he does seem to convince himself of certain things in the game he was in and using the deaths from this mission are mostly CIS supporters. Iskat is pretty blood thirsty from the looks of it. Even when she lost two fingers more than willing to keep going and even give the last clone a pretty brutal death.

Mad Max

Yeah, droidbrain ships.

windoverwaves

Correct me if I'm wrong, but CND_1.911.812.01.571_1310RV is Sara, right?

Jacob

Man that was good, gonna be interesting to see where you go with these 2 new characters. Also Rain is in for a pleasant surprise

axel jensen

the republic is falling to the same treachery the separatists are only diffrence is one has rain and one does not. one would think they would vet jedi returning from the enemy a bit better.

Dineshraj Dhandapani

I bet this becomes real useful when rain comes calling during his invasion of the core


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