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Chapter 58

🕑 Added 2024-05-26 14:39:44 +0000 UTC

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Puncake1102

Occam’s razor says that Ventress recorded the message and then leaked it, not like she’s gonna have any reasons to protect Dooku anymore

LurkerFrontCenter

im dying bro i saw it updated hours ago on royal road

Volker

No new chapter yet with that cliffhanger😭😭😭

H

As far as the Republic is concerned, the Confederacy's government is a criminal organization that imposes their will on Republic citizens by force, extorts them for money (taxes), and uses that money and their association with a ring of illegal arms manufacturers (industry) to outfit a coalition of warlords that acts to prop up said criminal enterprise (military) in their effort to evade justice (protect their sovereignty) from the sole legitimate galactic polity(the Galactic Republic).

H

He was always a force black hole- the only difference if any as far as I can tell is that plans only known to machines and himself are not accessible to force users' clairvoyance and their force enhanced intuition provides no insight into his intentions. The force may be able to provide insight into the the intent of his subordinates (like if they're about to attack a Jedi) but so long as he is responsible for issuing the orders that dictate the course of a battle, force users cannot predict how the battle will evolve and have to use their own judgement to anticipate his plans like everyone else.

SusshiRoll

I think Rain has bigger play here. Considering his little Jedi spy doing her own thing. Probably trying to find concrete proof of the two Siths working together.

Mirrthful

With like... what exactly? See if I can help.

AlthePal

I understood that part as them having shot Ventress down and then proceeded to their next priority target, everyone else. This chapter has left me with a ton of lingering questions and confusion.

Max

As per the fandom article on mandalorian standoff, it describes a situation where no party has a conceivable path to victory and is therefore the Star Wars equivalent to a mexican standoff. The SW term has only been used once as far as the article is concerned on Antolus I. Obi-Wan and a few Seppies fought up to the point of a standoff only to make a truce and attempt to stop a Seperatist experimental weapon which would disastrously impact the planet as well as everyone upon it.

PearsMan

Ah I didn’t realize that this is how jamming feels like. Ty

Mirrthful

I see it. It sounded right as I wrote it. Thanks for the heads up.

Notcreepycreeper

In return for removing Dolly from the confederacy? 100% he’d jump on that

William M.

Oh, on another note I found an issue with one of the sentences in the latest chapter: "And on that spacelane of thought, wasn’t she ordered not to take command of a powerful, secret fleet to use against their enemies– was she not sailing straight towards her own tomb?" I think I can kinda intuit what you meant but you should fix things like "wasn't she ordered not to take command of a powerful, secret fleet". Given she was ordered to do the opposite.

William M.

"'My frigates can jam the slave circuitry between their ships, breaking up their coherence,' the Mistryl told him." As mentioned in the chapter, all of those Confederate Ships started jamming....well everything really.

William M.

Technically, yes, but it seems that it was only mentioned once: in a Clone Wars comic *strip* (not even a full comic) called "Deadly Allies". How the heck does Mirrthfully find all these incredibly obscure references?!

William M.

So from what I read, the Mistryl Frigates + Rain's Intelligence division intercepted both Doku's transmission and the transmission of the fleet control codes. You will note that the Storm Fleet suddenly and inexplicably changed their behavior from firing on each other, to advancing. Almost as though they'd been given new orders. If so, that's going to make things very interesting. They had time to upload orders to each individual ship, so this whole 'disabling the Separatist fleet via jamming' thing could just be a ruse.

Loah

That would give away Rains access to Dooku's comms. That's a trump card he can't afford to lose

Bishop7053

Rain definitely recorded dooku there and just guaranteed the count is fucked politically

Iapetos

I assumed That's just Anakins distaste for the Separatists speaking there. Not recognising the Confederacy as a legitimate state with a proper military, and instead deciding to call Rain a warlord instead

PearsMan

What happened that caused all white out and static?

tianzigamer X

Well yea finally we see Anakin being competent if it is not against Rain the another Protagonist "halo". In the last chapters Rain is getting a bit overawe... a first he was just a great stragegist with a bit forboding (because he knows the story/future). Somehow he is now a force black hole and the nemesis of jedis, he aura is as good as jedi battle meditation, and the Perlemian coalition fleet from a ragtag to the most elite fleet of the confederacy. Next he will go toe to toe with the jedi high council, when he enter the core worlds and Coruscant.

Sekander

Anakin thinks of the „Battle Hydra“ as a warlord in this chapter, but isn’t Rain still acting as an admiral? I would guess that after he breaches the lines further his true ambitions (orders) would become obvious and he would truly be regarded as a warlord, but for now I would have thought everyone would still think of him as part of the regular Confederate offensive.

Overclocked

I really want to see Rain barge in at the end when everyone has killed each other lol

Voligne

I bet Rain recorded different messages depending on who would be present.

Michael K

It's not like Rain sent over the Intelligence division or something... 😆

Necessary Lark

Has anyone else heard the phrase mandalorian stand-off in star wars before? This is my first, but whether the author came up with it or not I love it😂

Sean McClain

Rain recorded message to be played soon.

Akel

I know right?!?!

Trailblazer

Well I'll be damned, Anakin actually and effortlessly defeated the Storm Fleet. Granted, he has Emberlene Fleet's help but I guess I can't discount his protagonist-ness just yet. And Ventress is down on her luck. Either she leaves with one of them, or she isn't leaving at all.

Mrsean22

Well Ventress is officially not on Dookus side anymore. Though she technically not on Rains side yet. Though I guess this stand off is gonna be the attempt to get her on side. But yeah Dooku again miscalculated and is gonna lose the Storm Fleet. Though getting Ventress does give so much information on Dooku it isn't even funny.

Puncake1102

> “Nothing,” Dooku replied simply, the single word like a vibroknife in her gut, and the next words twisted it mercilessly, “The Confederacy means nothing to me. Your mistake, Asajj, was not realising this, and not realising you were but a mere piece in a greater game you know nothing about. PLEASE tell me Rain got that recorded, that’s gg to Dooku’s gig as a Separatist

JAMAJ

Ahhh I hope she some how survives

The Dude

Neat

Triangulum

Hell yeah TFTC 🙏


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