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Chapter 59

🕑 Added 2024-06-03 16:55:43 +0000 UTC

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north

this comment made me look up what you meant by the final nail for palpatine, and holy shit! that's metal as hell!

Marcin

I think Rain wants to crush Open Circuit before Grant pulls his fleet togeather. And then it will be a mano a mano.

masterpeng

With the Open Circuit Fleet stuck due to the mines, Rain can just crush the remains of Grant's fleet before focusing on Scout and Yularen.

Mrsean22

Well Rain has certainly convinced the Givin to join the battle it seems because Scout is having trouble. That home field advantage really help Rain and the Givin. Though Grant isn't out of the game so maybe he does something to at least escape with Scouts fleet. But yeah Rains reputation just got more scary. Battle Hydra is right on the money for how Rain fights.

Jan Ullrich

Bonteri doesn’t need to take them captive he can let the plant deal with that

NostalgicTime

The alliance was undone due to a conflicting and confusing chain of command and a lack of contingency plans. Oh, also assumption, and a lot of them. Had they had a unified command and backup/contingency plans... they might have won. Tbh assumption seems to be a leaders worst enemy, probably caused the worst wars, like ww1 and 2. Those wavecrest frigates are cutting edge tech right? They're fucked... Calculations and Data from the Givin are like AI, but with the unique biological context... unless Grant, if he lives, reinforces them with his remaining fleet.

Aaron V.

Damm, once again a key figure of Palpatines empire bites the dust. (Though I guess Jerriod could still be alive as only the Jedi is confirmed dead.)

syu

To be fair, Grant's fleet is also from the siege fleet of Mechis III, albeit he probably chose the most suitable assault ships.

Bishop7053

That is a terrifyingly accurate feeling for what scout is going through lol

windoverwaves

They did. Maybe they don't count because they aren't a proper war fleet?

Skycrafter

They got off-screened earlier I do believe.

William M.

“Two down, one to go.” Shouldn't it be three down, one to go, not two? There was the seige fleet after all...

Sean McClain

True, that makes sense

The Stars Align

Really really impressed by the descriptions and the tension of the space battles. And oh boy, the republic is gonna panic once he comes to their core territories. Because just how much of a force do they have to pull back to stop him? Not only that they need to stop the three!!! Confederate fleets from joining up, requiring even more “blocking” fleets. This is a strategic nightmare, and I am going to love Sidious reaction to it. Because at this point he actually can’t do order 66 without losing the clone wars

syu

Escape pods, and the Givin would be available to take prisoners. It would be the same message as that sent to the supply ships. "You are trespassing on Separatist space. Evacuate to your escape pods, your ship will be destroyed. This is your only warning."

Null

😅 that's also an option hahaha it just my not so intelligent brain doing parkour with ideas 😆

Akel

More like a lawsuit and a cease and desist order. We can but dream and remember when the future had promise and potential.

Null

EPIC, I wish this was adapted to an AU mini series. THIS IS A MASTER PIECE OF A FANFIC MAYBE WE COULD ACTUALLY MAKE IT A REAL AU IF WE SEND MAILS TO DISNEY.

Yod

Scout has no idea that rain has no time for games, not to mention entire fleet would end up in Givin hands. For all they know hydra is just massacring GAR and has all the time in the world

Sean McClain

Evacuate to where?

Confused

God damn Rain that mad man with him destroying one fleet and temporarily crippling another it’s made the Givin convinced to throw there lot in with him properly. Truly he is living up to his name of Battle Hydra! Given how all his “heads” are striking at the republic whenever he seemingly pleases.

Tsorov

Bonterri would allow them to evacuate, and then blowmup their ships. There will be no temporary disabling, only broken ships and new hostages

Akel

This is just so damn tragic. War sucks man.

Trailblazer

Two Onderonians entered the ring, only one left. RIP Empatojayos Brand, looks like the honour of being the final nail sealing Palpatine's end will not be yours in this timeline. It's good to see Yularen putting his skill to good use and prevented Scout from making dumb decisions. Taskforce Swift Justice is already doomed, might as well prepare the Open Circle Fleet with the time they bought.

Sean McClain

Scout should order a surrender, because Bonteri is too honorable to massacre them and does not have the time or man power to take them prisoner, best he can do is disable their ships for a while and then take his fleet to the next objective. Puts an enemy fleet out of commision for a time and allows him to get to the more important objectives on time without loasing additional ships. Strategicly I think it's the best move for the Open Circle Fleet.

King Henry V

I think the key takeaway has to be that somehow the whole of three fleets destroyed means Palpatines worst vision of how it might end up in this sector of space are completely upended

King Henry V

Post it now :P

King Henry V

Wow that is evilly complete as a defeat that Bonteri could provide

Puncake1102

Lol this is like a horror game, Scout can see roughly where the monster is but he’s still munching on all her friends regardless

Mirrthful

mfw I miss an upload by a full working day. sorry about that, people. hopefully the next chapter will actually be posted on sunday next time. it will conclude both the Battle of Llon Nebula and Battle of Yag'Dhul simultaneously. thanks for reading!

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dmsnaz

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