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Chapter 81

🕑 Added 2024-11-10 17:28:17 +0000 UTC

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Andri Gschwend

Belly Laughed at Superweapons being required to have a fatal weakness.

IceHot

I hope Rain didn't get too many other dealer add-ons to go over MSRP...

Akel

I was thinking whoever won the battle get's a little Rain surprise, not that he would help Dooku. But now I'm not so sure.

PearsMan

So there might be a major crippling on both sides coming. For the republic its order 66 happening on the fight at Serreno, crippling the remaining Jedi populous since the rest are spread so thin across. This would hurt the republic since the chapter did highlight the seps are catching up. And the confederacy is going to have a north vs south situation unless they take advantage of the situation. But it’s dicey

PearsMan

Yooo our clanker is back. I wonder if the new droid is like uhh actually sir I reviewed your past missions n u could have done this n that better cus of my superior analysis but who was that mighty fine clanka you had with you?

Tsorov

Oops, didn't read that part! Sorry

Ordic

Highly improbable since the schematics are often destroyed along with the superweapons (cant have them falling into enemy hands / why make multiple copies ? For redundancy ? I dont know this redundancy fellow but you can tell him to bugger off and away from me supahwepn!

windoverwaves

... Is Rain even going to help Dooku? Or is he there to pull the Jedi out fom being murdered by their own clones when the order 66 button get pressed? And Dooku definitely have at least one Subjugator Class Heavy Cruiser. The Subjugator herself under Grevious.

windoverwaves

We aren't. That sentence is: 'It was the twilight of the fourteenth year since the Great ReSynchronization, and in another galaxy, the closing months of 21 BBY.' The timeline now is 14GrS, counting since the Great ReSynchronisation. with 0GrS at 965 years after the Seventh Battle of Ruusan. That has always been the year-counting method in this fic as seen in the infoboxes. The BBY mentioned here is a reference to the canon timeline: 'in another galaxy'

Tsorov

Question: why are we using the BBY timeline? It isn't Galactik standard at the time because it hasn't happened yet

Tsorov

Well, the orders were public knowledge, the Jedi just didn't think the clones would act upon them. The chips in the Clones brains, if we tay true to Canon, forced them to kill the Jedi.

Tsorov

While that is true, I don't think he has more than a hundred frigates in the void, and the enemy has over 5000 Venators/Victories or whatever they count as capital ships. Unless Dooku can pull out a few Malevolance type ships out of nowhere, I don't think Rain is going to be of any help

Kaywye

I am still waiting for Rain's hand to swipe in and bat that coin out of the air.

elsicava

Augur came prepackaged with the ship, as special custom superweapons obviously require special custom super droids.

Voligne

Instead of trying to jump-scare Augur, why didnt Rain just ask for a super tactical droid that had never been turned on or initialized? That way he could tweak it to its hearts content. If he wanted to upload Tuff's personality matrix into it, there would have been no personality matrix for it to be protective of to begin with.

Ника Ви

Thanks for the chapter!

Dav

If you set out to write fanfic of something, some things just have to be explained. And I like comment sections that are more than tftc and reactions, discussions an questions are so much better.

Hailhound

This isn’t a Clone Wars the TV series fanfic, this is a Star Wars fanfic set in the clone wars. The author is already doing a lot across the galaxy right now, and any more would just be bloat. I have some favorite characters from the TV show too, but I totally fine with them not showing up here. It’s Mirth’s story and they can do what they darn want! We’re just along for the ride!

Voligne

Mother Talzin was involved mostly because she tried to kill Dooku, but that's not happening in this timeliness. Assaj has already been cut loose, and Dooku hasn't sent Grievance to Dathomir because he isn't in charge of the CIS military. So to be honest, Mother Talzin is just left to her own devices, and she doesn't have a reason to involve herself in galactic affairs.

Ordic

Ohoho rain's already setting up a pipeline straight from independence to serreno, i wonder how that will turn out

BigBillyWilly

Seems like Conqueress would be an unwise flagship for Bonteri as it's strength lies in being away from the front lines of any battle. Probably best to have it and its sister ships captained by droids with pinpoint accuracy. Would be good for a long range artillery barrage and then have the nimbler ships sweep in to clean up what's left. In terms of defending it, it would probably need a constant screen of Vultures. Like Napoleon III said, Order 66 is still a possibility and most of the jedi are being sent off to fight a battle while surrounded by "millions" of clone troopers. I know it's a slim possibility at this point, but I'm hoping Dooku does something to really flip the table. That guy seems to really have nothing to lose now.

E.O. Tenkey

One or two chapters ago; she was on a planet that got bombarded by Ambergine, if memory serves.

Meat

Couldn't evacuate from a planet in time, Horn is using orbital bombardment pretty much anytime he has an opportunity to do so "And it was firing upon Derra IV. Spiralling clouds of superheated maelstroms churned over its vast oceans, visible from outer space. Across the planet’s atmosphere, skyscraper-sized turbolaser bolts punched through the stratosphere, sending ripples outward, no more than raindrops on an endless pond from the distance."

Gabriel Clark

Bunt looking through all the schematics of super weapons across history: “…by the Force he’s right. What the hell is all of this?!”

Trasen56

Was it mentioned earlier how Aayla died?

Dav

He certainly is doing something, but he is not like the omnipresent force I always perceived him to be. Also it's a shame that more isn't being done with the minor villains. I know that Ventress is not in the picture in the whole Maul plot, but he was still in Mother Talzins sights, it's not like she stops her plans. I feel like every plot that is not directly concerning the lead characters is completely abandoned.

Kevin Neely

Savage is probably never recruited. Which leaves maul a mess with spider legs. No updates on the bounty hunters and the mandalorian conflict was mostly esclated by maul so I doubt vizsla has done much.

Mrsean22

Well the jedi are all prepared for the final battle against Palpatine and Dooku. Question is how much is it gonna work? Anakin not gonna be at the big battles but he got his own battle against Horn Ambigene which is looking like a big deal. Which does make me curious on which Jedi are with Anakin and Scout? Rain learning what his super battle ship is good and bad at. It's very much a long range ship that needs other ships to support it or just getting close would be bad for said super battle ship. Rain seems to be planning something and is thinking of using all thise spy ships he set up long ago for his plan. Don't remember how many there are but I imagine it's a decent amount. So Rain would have a decent size fleet if all brought together but all be Given ships and the spy ships types. Though said spy ships are ships Rain knows very well.

TPG

best response to this lol

Akel

Rain's spy fleet showing up outa the void would delightfully frustrating for all partys involved.

Kana

Awesome, great chapter, i'm so hyped.

Timo

This is an intergalactic war. There are for sure a lot of things happening we just do not see. And I am fine with that, otherwise we would see a lot less of Rain :D

AMR MNR

Well all those Jedi going to Serenno are dead. From our perspective it's a bit sad, knowing that they're all going to die. And that, Yoda probably isn't enough to defeat Palps, even with whoever comes with him for the confrontation. Partnering with RI to invade the Works? Now that's just a bad call in general. Either it'll turn into a bloodbath, or there will be nothing there to be found.

elsicava

wtf we literally saw him plotting a chapter ago. are we reading the same story?

elsicava

In a junkyard, fucking around doing bounty hunter stuff ig, chilling with his bro on dathomir, governing concordia, chilling with her sisters on dathomir, idk dead or something. grievous is fighting a war with the republic

Dav

Also Palpatine is extremely inactive, I always thought he was a master plotter and had hundreds of plans ongoing simultaneously.

Napoleon III

Well now the obvious conter play that Sidious could try is to engage order 66. The fact that it as not been brought up till now worries me a little. But I think Rain is way to smart to have not planed contingencies. I’m just puzzled as to why he didn’t warn the Jedi about it ?

Dav

What are the villainous characters of clone wars series doing? Such as Maul, Cad Bane, Savage Opress, Pre Vizsla, Mother Talzin, Durge? Also Grievous seems to be doing fuck all.

Apotheosis

Godamn... close to the end! This is crazy!

Man-O'-War

The fuse has been lit time to wait for the fireworks

Husinay

TFTC ! "This is not the end. This is not even the beginning of the end. But we could say, this is the end of the beginning."

Duke of Coffee

I want more~

Trailblazer

And for the Republic, the coin is in the air and the die is cast. How ironic, despite espousing the "no attachment" dogma it was the Jedi's unwaivering attachment to the Republic that lead to their downfall.


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