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Chapter 88

🕑 Added 2024-12-29 17:44:25 +0000 UTC

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Mad Max

I think I remember you having said that there would be 5 or so epilogues, so the meat of the story has to be done in the next five chapters? Not gonna lie, that is a TALL ask.

DatCameraMON

While I disagree on needing to finish the story in 10 chapters from a writing standpoint, if you are set on that, I think it would be best to let most of the readers know with an informational threadmark on SB/wherever else.

Bishop7053

Oh lawdy. Miirth himself liked the comment, the only question now is, does this bode well or ill for red mommy

Jake

Even if you have to rush the ending, an extended epilogue would be most welcome

Introspective_NPC

yo singaporean? if so, atb

Kevin Neely

Monitization of fictions featuring copyrighted content.

elsicava

Yep, I have mandatory military service soon so its going to be 2 years until I can start any new (major) project. I'm going to have to finish this story in 10 chapters, like it or not, unless you can wait a very very long hiatus. And even if you can, I can't.

Orbnet

It's cause royal road takes issues with monetisation of stories

Bishop7053

Why do I feel like all that glazing of Shaak is just death flags galore. Please don't let best red waifu die. She gets offed enough in every star wars media lol let her live. There's bloody montages on YouTube of her dying for gods sake

Volker

amazing as always :) just as a heads up: Patron is no longer linked with your RoyalRoad account. I hardly imagine it being intentional

Mad Max

They had to serve a tour in their military, iirc.

Von Harley

Not to jump the gun, but what are your current post story plans? Starting up a new story in a new world?

Duke of Coffee

It begins, hopefully Rain plan is be able to be pulled off. Because Darth Sidious has his plans that might counter Rain...

Duke of Coffee

I want more. 😆

Duke of Coffee

Or blow the building up sky high. 😜

Hailhound

I thought it was rain, either on Metalorn or on Onduran

nugitoBambino

Yeah there's some pretty hilarious youtube skits of obi-wan going "wait really??" followed by a quick resolution to the problem lol

Kaywye

I would consider it more realistic if that number was doubled. Please, give this story the room it needs to breathe, and organically find it's own path to its end.

Von Harley

I imagine his plan is to use the Jedi attacking him as an excuse to enact order 66, finally flipping the switch and making the clones in the task force turn on the Jedi at the same time.

Mrsean22

Hmmm the Battle of Serenno is soon to begin. The fact that most Palpatine loyalists are in the vanguard sounds good on paper but I get the feeling something it gonna hit the more Jedi supporters in the rear while the Battle is going on. My guess being Grievous. Jedi along with some clones heading to Palpatines little hiding spot when he wants to do shady stuff but Palpatine knows they are coming. So curious what Palpatine is trying to do. At least Yoda is coming in right away as reinforcements?

Mad Max

Not while Fordo exists.

Jarrik32

The whole thing screams ambush to me. As he has to know that this base (assuming it even belongs to him) is compromised, combine that with a need to quietly dispose of Gallia and the fact that the mission is officially an anti-seperatist strike? I'll take a wild guess and say that they'll find the 'Seperatists' all right. What happens after is the big question.

Michael K

I can't decide which plot thread I'm more terrified of. Here we go!

Kriegsdude

Considering the starlance arc took roughly a third of the story I don't think you're finishing the most important bit in 10 chapters.

Helios

Ah, Commander Thorn. Probably the coolest Clone Commander in the series.

Monkey.D.Luffy98

Lol, youre encountering the Oda and One Piece problem..... 10 chapters aint gonna be enough

Monkey.D.Luffy98

Order 66 is gonna hit like a fucking truck isn't it...

Dineshraj Dhandapani

We're in the final stretch now. I wonder how Palpatine manages to escape this noose.

quiscon

I had completely forgotten that dooku straight up told obi wan about the whole stick in the early movies.

elsicava

>me telling myself to finish this story in ten more chapters


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