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Chapter 90 (Updated)

🕑 Added 2025-01-12 18:21:04 +0000 UTC

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A⊄Pow(A)

Holy, do we get a Dooku + Windu team up vs order 66 clones. Boy do I want to see that! The idea of the two working together is epic.

Zielscheibe

Order 66 in full swing. Bonteri for the rescue

Von Harley

What's the expectation this all ends on a clean 100 chapter?

Quentin Johnson

Whoa I’m excited to see what happens next

Asharzal

"Order Sixty-Six is now in effect. The Jedi Order has turned againt the Republic, and must be terminated immediately". And so it begins. Or does it end?

Allan Chang

To those returning for the updated chapter, new content after "As the Invasion of Serenno began, one thought crossed Plo Koon’s mind; it would appear the Battle Hydra’s stratagem worked as intended, again."

Trailblazer

Uh oh.

Ewout

I mean more that it wouldn't be replacing one dictator for the other, because both Trench and Rain now have the same power (theoretically) and respect each other enough to not create a power struggle.

ben

coordinates to every warship in the star system to here -> hear

TheLostGolem

Rain did save Trench in the first few chapters to be fair. He had no reason to and his tactical Droid literally told him that it would be more beneficial to let Trench die. It makes perfect sense why Trench trusts Rain.

Ewout

Yeah, Trench is no longer only an admiral because of his Corporate sponsors, which is good. And remember that blatant corporate representation isn't allowed in the separatist parlaiment.

Ewout

The author said that, ingoring a few possible extra's, his "sci-fi brain juices" have been sucked dry. Most likely a fantasy then.

Ewout

And I have no doubt they will. Rain is no longer in a position where his autonomy is under control of someone above him if they need to forcibly remove her, and god knows the separatist parliament will approve of the actions Trench and Rain have to take. And it helps that Rain and Trench do seem to work together, or at least trust each other, more.

Ewout

Fun to see how frustrated Diedrich is with being hamstrung from attacking and dispatching of both fleets.

Ewout

I have no doubt that somone like Windu went through multiple stages in one second: What the f*ck is that -> thank god it destroyed the shields not us -> hell yeah the shields are destroyed lets goooooo -> wait, what if it happens again? And when he finds out this was done by the seps, now that will be an interesting reaction

BigBillyWilly

Oh wow, yeah I didn’t know that. All the best with his service then!

Kieran Hosty

Author is doing military service? I never even heard about this!

Voligne

Well, with a second sepratist faction arising, I am all but certain that the CIS will be more then capable of supporting itself going forward. I am curious how they will deal with the corpratists. I feel Trench has forged out on his own now.

Basil Harpham

Author is going to be doing his military service for the next few years so it would take time to even start.

Kaywye

Wow. I am impressed with this chapter. I am particularly impressed with your writing regarding Plo Koons force power based commands. It is jaw droppingly incredible without being overly flashy. It goes to show you that Sith have mental and emotional manipulation (basically the brute force approach) and Jedi are just able to perceive and communicate. Very well done.

Straven

Bloody great read, wondering how those not in the know are reacting to that clear enemy superweapon.

BigBillyWilly

Oh how I look forward to the face to face confrontation between Mace, Plo, Obi-Wan and Dooku. Nice chapter, the countdown to the end begins! Although, I do hope we get a look into the time frame of the OT trilogy or maybe a spin-off/continuation series? Maybe the CIS gets into a war with the Hutts and an aged Bonteri takes a certain scruffy nerf herder under his wing? It's that feeling you get when a series you enjoy is coming to an end and you want more to keep them dopamine levels up.

BigBillyWilly

Bonteri and Trench might have to forcefully remove her upon War's end at the Confederate Parliament's insistence.

Michael K

I wonder if Grevious is hunting the Aggressor, and Rain just gave away its location. There's also Order 66 hanging over everything...

Mrsean22

Well looks like Rain plan and Diedrich convinced Plo Koon to work with them. To be fair it was a risk but Rain is a person who keeps his word so that's helping. Though how both sides react after the Battle is questionable. Looking like the plan has worked. The shields to the planet are down so ground forces can start doing their thing. With the space battle going the Republics way through Plo Koon doing Battle Meditation. Though I'm waiting for the other shield to drop for the Republic forces whether it's Order 66, Palpatine doing something else or Dooku using one last ace up his sleeve like Grievous.

N0T0B0K

I wonder what's going to happen with the pantoran. Will she end up getting mellowed out by Bonteri, or will she be too far gone?

SuperbOwl67

I adore how you capture the intricacies of this world. If your next project is in Star Wars, I’d be interested to see another time period. If it’s going to be another property altogether, then I will still be onboard day one. With the great military sci fi tone, maybe Halo or Mass Effect? Either way, can’t wait to see how this story will end!

LurkerFrontCenter

I can't believe we hit last 10, what am I gonna read after?

Duke of Coffee

Rain stratagem always work. 😜

Reign

Man im so gonna miss your writing

elsicava

As we reach the last 10 chapters, I'm going to have to fiddle with the pacing a bit more, so this and future chapters may receive updates as I shuffle scenes around for a (hopefully!) satisfying ending. You'll get email/notifications, and the chapter titles with be edited with an (Updated) if that occurs. Other than that, I think the second to last Galaxy Map will also be uploaded soon. It's been a long time since the last one, and this one will have the most changes. But that's obvious. Anyway, hope you all have a nice week ahead. Once again, thanks for reading!


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