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Chapter 91

🕑 Added 2025-01-19 18:30:55 +0000 UTC

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William M.

The commonor chapter was changed in the SB release to show Rain's in pounded fleet self-reactivating, and we haven't seen them since. I'm very curious to see what happened to them. Maybe they're coming to help?

Jarrik32

Something I'm curious about is if any clones outside of the bad batch (with their explicitly faulty implementation) are able to resist the effects of the chips like Rex could. If admittedly only briefly. Or is that still a one off fluke that may or may not come from the fact that he was somewhat aware of the chips true nature.

Quentin Johnson

I really do hope Barriss comes out a hero after all this. So much chaos but hopefully lives can be saved, and Palpatine only gets to watch the Jedi escape from his grasp! Bonus points if Coruscant’s defenses and life supporting systems get destroyed again during the escape lol

elsicava

Never. I grew up with TCW series, and this story is a fanfic of the TCW series. Never at any point were the clones without inhibitor chips.

A⊄Pow(A)

@Mirthfully, at any point did you consider writing order 66 without the inhibitor chips? Whenever they come up there are always fans that swear by the OG explanation being the more compelling of the two. Curious about your take.

CJ Tamberella

New Republic allying with seps? Or meld both surviving governments into one body, after their respective civil wars end

Jarrik32

What is kind of tragic about the duel between the Jedi and Sith is how it's all a sidenote for everything happening elsewhere. Except for possibly the Jedi sent down to the works, everyone involved in the coup knew perfectly well that the situation on Coruscant had degraded well past the point of saving and that their was no path to removing Sideous any more (The only reason Sideous didn't simply rig the 'trial' to aquit him was because he simply didn't care about keeping the illusion of Democracy going anymore). As the plotters may have been disappointed but nobody was surprised by the vote failing. The only reason they went to the senate at all was as a last roll of the dice and to set the stage for the coming war. As the fate of the galaxy will be decided one way or another at Serenno, at Raxus and a dozen other locations.

Damocles

Honestly you have outdone yourself with this chapter, excellent storytelling

windoverwaves

The one time we have concrete evidence of this is way back before Centares (26, I think?), in that chapter with the two Yorktowns convoy raiding. There, the string of numbers between CND and 1310RV is decrypted as Saratoga. That apparently got stuck in my brain.

Triangulum

The rumblings of a Republic Civil War have been heavily hinted at for a long while now. I think the Jedi are going to join the separatists in part, at least as allies under a new Republic, facing off against Palpy’s Empire. Honestly the warring states have been foreshadowed for so long that I’ll be a bit disappointed if Sidious completely flops here. Another thing to consider is whether Anakin will side with the Jedi, as while he hasn’t been nearly as closely tied to Palpatine he has grown an extremely strong hatred for the Separatists and those he sees as collaborators. Only time will tell I guess.

Michael K

All those Chekov's guns going off! Well done!

elsicava

Covered that in a previous chapter. I think 87.

StarBat

Why not edit the message to Order 65? Needs senate approval?

Delakar

In the essence of good storytelling I hope Palpatine wins this. With the jedi forced into hiding or joining the separatists. And the galactic empire being established. I think it would make for better storytelling. You gotta let the bad guys win and bad things to happen.

Hailhound

Bruh I thought that was useless numbers. 1310RV being Saratoga is an insane catch

Hailhound

Oh yeah blue light isn’t necessarily from a lightsaber. Could easily be from a pocket holorecorder, and Palps defenestrated them when he realized.

NyaaMe0w

You are probaly right. FLIGHT PLAN KROS–JLEK–RUAN–FOST–CANT is the hyperlane from Empress Teta(also known as Koros), Jerrilek, Ruan, Foerost to Coruscant. Nice catch!

windoverwaves

Sara to the rescue!

windoverwaves

Maybe those ships impounded would come, however, 1310RV is Saratoga. She and Lexington got 'captured' by the navy of Empress Tata during the 'battle' there with Plo.

Bishop7053

And it's a 60 40 split civil war, when they are already split from a civil war. Palps only has like a third of the republic, granted it's the more dense third. Still not gonna go as good as he thinks would be my bet

TheLostGolem

The real question is if he'll side with Palp or not

Volker

goose bumps

BigBillyWilly

Excellent chapter. Love how Palpatine just dropped the act upon the brief reflection that he pretty much is the Republic at this point. Although, a 60/40 split in the vote isn't as strong a lead as he may believe it to be. That's still a considerable number of planets/systems that could break off and join/ally with the Raxus Confederacy. From the last chapter, it feels as if the Order still managed to get through if Windu's reaction was any indication, unless that was more so over Palpatine letting his Sidious out in the open. Looking forward to the next chapter as we move closer towards the end.

Bishop7053

I'm hoping they started recording and live streaming to the public to expose palps, maybe it was one of them and not Shaak getting added to the death montage.

Cesar gonzalez

The chapter is so hype

TyrTheFallen

I have to say that this was far better than the original scene in the film, as I had always thought the reveal could have been done better.

Ewout

Well she did say that if she died, she'd prefer to go by a red lightsaber, so I guess at least she achieved that goal.

Ewout

Depends, I don't know if any of the masters are old enough to have fought with Plo-Koon in the Stark-hyperspace war. If so, she would be the second most trained.

Ewout

Didn't Diedrich describe them as "a force that can conquer a planet" after she got given the chip as an emergency back door by Rain? So I guess it's a bit more 8 sep ships.

Bishop7053

We didn't actually see Mommy Shaak get offed so I will continue to hold out hope that that dem tig ol red bitties live!

Bishop7053

Especially as he was probably about to try and say fuck it and blast palps, would have been hilarious

VCent

Poor Captain Dyne and his men: Stuck watching Iskat redecorating Palpy's room as per Khorne's guidelines and watching as the Supreme Chancellor duke it out with 3 Jedi and somehow winning. Are they still alive somehow? Or did they follow on Valiant's canon end just like in this chapter?

Aaron Greene

Out on the front, in separatist space iirc

Aaron Greene

SO FUCKING HYPE!!!

Dineshraj Dhandapani

I AM THE REPUBLIC! DAMN what a line

Docnox

Now… where is Skywalker in this timeline again

THE ONE ABOVE ALL THE LIVING TRIBUNAL

Shaak Ti is surprisingly one of the best fighters and users of Makashi right behind Dooku.

Kaywye

Holy kriff! I am thrilled that the whole story trundled along feeling like it could continue forever, just like real life. Also like life all it took was the first domino to fall, and now things have accelerated to a level that feels like it is beyond our ability to control. We are on the downswing of this Rollercoaster....let's see where it takes us. Thank you.

NyaaMe0w

Are the reinforcments that Barris is calling the seperatist ships that were inpounded at Commenor? I remember them moving after Cali Trilm went past the planet.

William M.

Eh, it'll take years for anyone to go through all that data. The Separatists might be able to do it faster, but then the info would still be coming from them.

Kieran Hosty

Alea Ieacta Est! Welp, that probably makes Shaak-Ti probably dead for the umpteenth time, this time defenestration.

SlanneshSoldier69

Completely missed that nice

Isabel

This is amazing! Waiting another week for the next chapter is gonna be heck

SpaceFan839

I see no one yet has focused on the fact that PRIESTESS was given the order to data mine all of Coruscant and transmit EVERYTHING. This is going to include all the juice data that will be terribly inconvenient for our dear old Palpatine. Might even cause a rebellion or two or five far too early for Palpatine to deal with properly.

Mrsean22

So it begins. I'm guessing Yoda is the last Jedi facing Palpatine. Bode is causing much chaos as possible for the Jedi on and off planet a fighting chance against Order 66. Then we have Barris preparing for a siege with some old Jedi masters and very young Padawans and Younglings but just have to last for eighteen hours. Funny enough Barris might be one of the more experienced Jedi on war at the Temple currently.

Joel

Oh boy. Here we go

Duke of Coffee

Too late to stop the Order 66 but hopefully the younglings are not killed in this siege...

Jarrik32

RIP poor commander Valiant. I can't imagine the feeling of having your free will ripped away from you in seconds with nothing more than a handful of words.

Man-O'-War

OH MAN HERE WE GO

Brioche

Droids extracting jedi from Coruscant is going to be the funniest shit ever, I can’t wait!

Sean McClain

So the final stage of the war has begun

Basil Harpham

The trigger is pulled

Trailblazer

RIP Adi Gallia, this civil war wouldn't be possible without your help. Let's hope Barriss and the Temple Jedi have what it takes to last the siege for 18 hours before they could be evacuated to Empress Teta.


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