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The Sixth School. Chapter 027.

🕑 Added 2023-07-18 04:11:22 +0000 UTC

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BlaQQuill

Thanks Magnus, your understanding means a lot to me.

BlaQQuill

Thanks a ton, Murky.

Magnus

I like the current length of the chapters, doesn't matter if they take longer. Don't worry about having to deliver one every 5 days, if you stress too much it will just affect the quality.

Murky

"Her how the town head can suppress the other three families and maintain a hold on the reins of power in this town,” She stated." - maybe Her = Nor? "He presently wasn’t In any condition to speak, so Olivia continued to speak." - remove cap. on "In" "If only a bitter, angry, jaded, or fearful husk of you survives the torture, then you haven’t really survived Greg,” She added" - called him Greg "The familiar, however, had picked .one of his own sensations and magnified it a thousandfold!" - ".one" should be "one"


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