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The Sixth School. Chapter 029.

🕑 Added 2023-07-31 13:06:05 +0000 UTC

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BlaQQuill

Do not worry. I am always open to criticism. I don't fault anyone for pointing out something they think I'm doing wrong. In fact, I welcome it. Because if they are right, it's something I can improve on and become a better writer as a result of it.

J Snyder

Hopefully this isn’t taken the wrong way, but this chapter feels like the story is finally getting started. It’s been a very slow build so far. I’m reminded of Zane Grey western novels. While his world-building and descriptive writing was visually compelling, he often rambled a bit too much and crossed the line of “too much filler”. Again, not meant as a heavy criticism, I’m enjoying it and I understand you have to build up the world and “system” your story is held within. But I do hope the future chapters are more like this one and move a little faster.

BlaQQuill

Thanks man. It always makes my day to hear that my readers enjoyed my work. You taking the time to let me know has just brightened my day.😊

Dennis Banfield

You keep hitting these chapters out of the park! Really well done as always, and a cliff hanger to boot! Now I’ll be counting down the next 5 days all over again 😉