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Editing Marathon: Chapter One.
🕑 Added 2024-07-26 11:30:50 +0000 UTCHi guys,
So the Marathon Begins.
I'd like to clarify a few things, just in case I wasn't clear in my previous post.
The first and most important thing is I DON'T expect you guys to do the actual editing. I repeat, DON'T EDIT THE CHAPTERS, I will do that myself. All I am asking is that you reread the chapter, that's it. In other words, several people will be looking for errors and calling them out. But only I will be making actual changes to the Chapters. So just read it and comment here if you find any errors, and don't get bogged down trying to edit the chapter by yourself.
To help make calling out errors easier, you will find that the paragraphs are numbered. So if you find an error, you can just reference the specific paragraph it was on.
For example; Paragraph 12, You used "it's" instead of "its".
Finally, Each chapter will have its own post. So, kindly make sure you are posting the correction under the right post. Don't post corrections for Chapter two on the post for Chapter three.
Here is Chapter one
Once again, thanks for all the help you guys offer on this.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
Paragraph 5, first sentence is awkward.. Maybe change had been flooding to filled. Also, #6, 3rd sentence doesn't need a comma after suffered. #8, comma after bedridden. #9, should have a period instead of comma BTW short and the
ConstantWonder
Google doc, not goigle dice.
ConstantWonder
Just a suggestion: instead of doing feedback via patreon comments. Could you open up a goigle dice that people can comment and leave suggestions on. It would be so so much better to see this inline for the editor, author and the reviewers
