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Editing Marathon: Chapter Two.
🕑 Added 2024-07-26 11:37:15 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Two.
Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
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BlaQQuill
I'm not quite certain what you mean here, could you please explain.
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
#52 doesn't need a comma here: just because the system asked him to do something(,) didn’t mean that it was a good idea to do it. Should add a comma here, remove into: whether it was worth it(,) but also (into) how to go about
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
#46, can can change as to a . Or add a comma after explanations : (offer explanations. When Greg looked) . I would do a period to shorten the sentence.
