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Editing Marathon: Chapter Four.

🕑 Added 2024-07-27 12:30:22 +0000 UTC

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Murky

#23 - got some extra punctuation ".," near the end of this sentence: Exposing your patients to your bodily fluids is a quick way to add more complications to the treatment process if not outright killing them.,” Alena explained.

Murky

#21 - He knew that someday, Alena was bound to leave and so had repeatedly urged her to take in her daughter as his apprentice. | Should be: his daughter as her apprentice


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