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Editing Marathon: Chapter Ten.
🕑 Added 2024-07-30 11:43:55 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Ten.
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λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
#52, remove a comma : Greg couldn’t help but blush as he realized that (,) not only did he not know the name of someone
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
#50, add a comma before when, in, or both.. Or you can remove them all: The irony of him thinking this (,) when he had what was possibly the biggest cheat in the world (,) in the form of the system, wasn’t lost on Greg.
