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Editing Marathon: Chapter Sixteen.

🕑 Added 2024-09-12 13:20:58 +0000 UTC

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λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs

#65, : "When the next morning, he had woken up" looks better as "The next morning, when he had woken up"

λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs

#61, remove comma : lines on his face(,) and a mouth


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