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Editing Marathon: Chapter Seventeen.
🕑 Added 2024-09-12 13:27:12 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Seventeen.
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λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
#40, add comma : took hold of the threetusk boar’s legs with both hands(,) and with one heave, lifted it
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
#40, looks better if you add "but" and add commas around however : He wasn’t sure if steroids back on earth felt like this, but Greg, however, doubted it.
