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Editing Marathon: Chapter Nineteen.

🕑 Added 2024-09-12 13:30:18 +0000 UTC

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λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs

#8, comma to semi ; or period : It wasn’t just his mask(,) all the other title items, along with the magical items that he’d bought from the system were gone.

λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs

4, I'd remove but. Could change to a comma, but the sentence is quite long. : In the room, there were also two other tables. (But) From what Greg could see


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