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Editing Marathon: Chapter Eighty Four.

🕑 Added 2024-10-03 02:56:19 +0000 UTC

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BlaQQuill

I considered that, but after going over the book a second time. I decided to just keep it the way it currently is. Thanks for the suggestion though...

David Siviour

I highly recommend thinking about stopping the first book towards the start of this chapter. At the end of #19. Just that currently there is too much plot development in chapter 88 without enough dialogue to support it without it feeling rushed. Just trying to assist.


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