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Chapter 108 : Battle of Familiars' Conclusion

🕑 Added 2024-10-31 06:21:00 +0000 UTC

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PenguinDLL

I believe the following extract is written twice : "With precise, powerful strikes, she broke through Netsu’s defenses, managing to sever his remaining wing. The wing fell, free of the time-lock’s effects, but the fox grimaced as her paws burned from the contact." The following paragraph is paraphrasing the extract.

mimou

You're right, let me edit that!

Jeff091

hi, thanks for the chapter Total individual points accumulated: 129,500 Ascension Points +this floor Total individual points accumulated this floor: 129,500 Ascension Points otherwise it sounds as if he lost points since he got more on the first floor

Amari Charles

This was fun!

Keegan Moss

I only ask because you do have ice and fire dragons and the black tortoise, which depending on what logic you use for determining their elements/ theme it would imply the tortoise and ice dragon are result of innate skills from their owners, or that all of them could/were affected by some level of guided evolution/ general myths associated with them, hence the rebirth part of phoenixes

mimou

I did not show the training he gave to the Phoenix in order to hide his abilities, but they'll be explained.

mimou

That is a good question I'll answer to in the next chapter.

Keegan Moss

Is this a “this is why he is a phoenix” or is it more of how his innate skill affected the phoenix, similar to how the time dragon was a result of the time skill


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