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Charlie’s Sirens - Part 2 [Mermaid TG]

🕑 Added 2024-10-06 20:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Grymmette

"Charlie blinked in surprise, Harry had depended on him that much? He’d always assumed that Harry kept him around to help him out and mooch off, but he didn’t know that Max actually respected him for it. " I think here you meant to use only Max's name. Harry was talking about Max, and didn't say anything about depending on Charlie as much as Max did.

Rat matt

Good job love this story can't wait for the next part 👍


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