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For Her Eyes Only - Part 3 [Lesbian Spy TG]

🕑 Added 2024-09-06 21:03:01 +0000 UTC

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The Spiralled Eye

I did some pretty substantial rewrites at one point. Clearly I missed stuff.

Greatsage

There are an unusual number of typos but the story itself is great, very entertaining.

The Spiralled Eye

Dear lord, this story in a trainwreck, sorry. Fixing it now. This is why I try to avoid rewriting where I can.

Greatsage

Sorry to be pedantic, but Misty's dress goes from long and crimson to short and gold within the same sentence

The Spiralled Eye

Ah, in the original draft, Misty's name was going to be Sarah Silver, to match with Jasmine Jewel, but then I decided to make her have more traditional Bond Girl name instead. I thought I'd changed them all but clearly I missed some. Thank you! I will fix that up!

Grymmette

When Misty met Isabella her name switched to Sarah several times. Eventually it was consistently Misty again. Also: "a teasing touch that made her *parents* shudder with want" was very funny but probably a typo.


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