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Double-Blind CH22

🕑 Added 2022-02-17 05:27:11 +0000 UTC

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Alice

I love that the god of entropy is mentioned as dying. Of course he is! You can’t represent the idea of loss of energy without losing your own! Such a great detail

Parker Groseclose

Edits: 'But the attention of a divine power was notsomething I wanted.' -> power was not_something 'My first instinct was the close the window' -> My first instinct was to close the window 'My half-run slowed, as I turned back to towards the shrine.' -> delete to

Novice Reader

If I was MC I would do whatever it takes to become more powerful

The Lost Pages

Thanks for the double chapter!

Anthony P.

He better not. It’d be disappointing if the story ends at chapter thirty-four because some deity squishes him like a mouse.

Wyv

So... no touching other shrines, I guess?


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