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Double-Blind CH195

🕑 Added 2022-12-23 11:27:19 +0000 UTC

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Wyv

Matt getting Tara's name wrong is honestly such an asshole thing to do, I love it. So in character.

Kalliope

oh my gosh. TFTC. I found the ripple to be difficult to visualize. Probably the fault's on my side, but the waterfall sounded like a tiny rivulet, not something to walk into, on a sunny meadow with low hills, something where you'd expect flowers and cows on. Also if the ripple acts like some kind of portal into the unknown, you'd try to do more than just loop a rope around yourself - for example check out the immediate surroundings for an hour behind the ripple, instead of walking ahead? I'm along for the ride, but this felt slightly off. However, the way Matt and Keith panicked and hustled right at the end was very natural! Your action and dialogue is wonderful, as it is always.


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