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NO NUT NOVEMBER DAY 7 ,8 ,9 review BlackFire.

🕑 Added 2021-11-08 03:04:08 +0000 UTC
NO NUT NOVEMBER DAY 7 ,8 ,9 review BlackFire.
NO NUT NOVEMBER DAY 7 ,8 ,9 review BlackFire.
NO NUT NOVEMBER DAY 7 ,8 ,9 review BlackFire.

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VnS2imp

Thanks you !. I'm appreciate that.

정현 박

Good

madworld238

as for grammar Day 7: only thing i see is when Blackfire says "i think you already know who i'm right?" should be "i think you already know who i am, right?" Day 8: Blackfire saying "with your friend but he's so weakness" should be " with your friend but he's so weak" and when she says "i hope you can strongher than him" should be "i hope you are stronger than him" and with robin you can just remove the "Here" in his sentence Day 9: Blackfire saying " don't worried" should be "don't worry" and Robin you can replace "don't try to" into simply "stop"

madworld238

i love this but honestly i was expecting Robin to have the biggest dick while beast boy and Cyborg were small.

Dream71

Dam hope beast boy get some love.


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