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An Offer He Can't Refuse Ch. 16
🕑 Added 2024-06-29 15:14:18 +0000 UTCAlright, here it is: after some delays in the past months, the new AOHCR chapter is finally ready!
Like I mentioned before, this episode is focused around a smaller cast, namely just Mike, Julia and Jennifer. In terms of sheer word count, I guess Jennifer takes a larger share here, but as far as I'm concerned like Julia always shines in a special way any time she's on, regardless of how big or small a role she has. But maybe that's just me.
I have to say, after juggling the full cast of characters in those big group scenes in the previous couple of chapters, this one felt much more manageable and smooth to sort through. Of course, that may also have to do with the fact that scenes involving Julia and Jennifer come sort of easy, due to the chemistry between them, but again, maybe that's just me.
Anyway, here's AOHCR Chapter 16! Enjoy!
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Comments
ZenZerker
Indeed, Lori has the most potential in the story right now, as far as character development goes. Of course, with such a big cast, it's tough to give every single character a lot of attention, but don't worry: Lori is going to have her moment(s)!
Joshua Lyon
I just want to say that I hope Lori can get more scene time. I felt like she was going to exciting new places.
