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Chapter 50 A Soldiers Life Posted
🕑 Added 2023-08-10 01:44:10 +0000 UTCHere is the long awaited chapter 50....the big reveal
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Erick Thiemke
i will look into editing it
Robert Apgar
Their conversation was a bit weird, Castiel says, "The Emperor ate my Grandpa for his Void essence." And the weird part is the MC answer, "So are you gonna turn me in to the Emperor?" At least to me that shouldnt be the first thing to say, maybe show some empathy and then ask her what her plans are now that she knows instead. Another suggestion woukd be to italics Madridspain as if she is trying to say it in a different language.
Erick Thiemke
i dont know yet. i assume it is going to be a life service to the empire but only a certain term in the Legion
Chong Go
How long do mages have to serve in the army? I assume it's some sort of requirement in associated with going to the mage academy?
J S
Here they come!
