Chapt 55 A Soldiers Life Posted
🕑 Added 2023-08-17 03:14:42 +0000 UTCok the second of two tough chapters to write. some of you guessed the outcome already. maybe it needs tweaking. some will call the MC smart, some stupid, i am hoping for the middle ground - overly cautious, enjoy the read
Comments
Erick Thiemke
booby-trapping the steps seems like a legitimate play. one easy access point to make as treacherous as possible
lenkite
Sorry, but BUTTER THE STEPS ?? What ? Please let just an Elven Sniper Archer target and hit him and he falls behind. Not this ridiculous thing of buttering up steps. Elves have better night vision anyways so this buttering up doesn't even make any sense.
Erick Thiemke
thanks i corrected it and it will be correct when i repost with the edits
Morten Bork
Just want to say. The titel of chapter 55, is 54.
Lemes
I think maybe the Bartyradian army avoids the pursuit in fear of a void mage. Apparently they manage to know what powers the magicians have and have already identified this potential of the MC. There's also the fact that apparently their general is injured. Putting it all together, there's a real possibility they could escape.
Freedcats
Maybe I'm in the minority, but I like this arc. I thought our MC seemed pretty human during this whole siege and retreat thing. Like a dude over his head and trying his best to not get caught, have his secrets revealed, or die. Did he make mistakes, sure, that could be argued. But again, in very human ways. Oh, and for anyone who uses the words Plot Armor, STFU!