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A Soldier's Life - 77 - A Sense of Foreboding

🕑 Added 2023-09-30 20:54:58 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

When I think about the Gladius I think of shield walls and a stabbing weapon. Also the Romans were short, under 5’6” where Eryk is over 6’ so a longer blade makes sense. When I was doing the spit balling early in the story I was thinking he would be wielding two short swords and have a spell form for time that allow him to accelerate time on his person, making him a whirling dervish

Otto Kovar

you do not have to do it all at once. Keep it vague and omit the details and add them over the story. Here a hunting sword. A short single edged blade. Later on: this antler grip really fits me well and has a nice grip to it. At a light spar: The tip curves to a wicked point, redirecting my strikes makes it really useful and may deliver some devastating wounds. later at a campfire: Used this sword for quite a while now, never sharpened it once. Taking a closer look i spot some wierd looking script along the spine. Nice detailing. Also i like this bronze colored handguard, really helps one catch the blade in a scuffle.

Erick Thiemke

this is good. not sure if readers want me to spend a few paragraphs describing the blade they are using. it could be from any era.... Maybe in a rewrite of the earlier chapters I can include it.

Otto Kovar

makes sense

Erick Thiemke

71 cm is the 28 inches so it is close. I was actually only addressing this as someone was concered with the MC favoring a short sword and did not have good reach. so i was aiming for the longest short sword possible :)

Otto Kovar

also the most used short sword in the history of mankind was the gladius and that is 45–68 cm in blade length

Otto Kovar

how about the oakshot typology, it is widely used to differentiate which sword form was popular throughout the middle ages up to the late renaissance era, there are also other typologies, depending on which region one might focus i think the oakshot type xiv is the closest to the term short sword, though in other typologies that might differ https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oakeshott_typology

Erick Thiemke

this was what I referenced when writing that

Erick Thiemke

https://faitsdarmes.com/en/36-short-sword#:~:text=The%20short%20sword%20commonly%20designates,the%20shape%20of%20the%20rapier.

Otto Kovar

your 28 inch short sword is kind of longsword length (they had a 80- 110 cm blade) even if you meant total length i doubt the handle is longer than a foot, i bet that was just a typo


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