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A Soldier's Life - 94 -

🕑 Added 2023-11-09 00:59:30 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

corrected, thank you

Giles Swatos

"I did notice that his eyes looked a little hallowed. " Ok, I'm not sure if you were trying for hallowed, hollowed, or haloed in this line, but something seems fishy. In context, I think you were going for hollowed, as in sunken, with dark rings, due to the stress of fueling a skill. Maybe his eyes were hallowed, as in blessed and sacred. Maybe he had literal halos circling his eyes like some manga angel. enquiring minds wanna know.

Erick Thiemke

Some people are impatient and what everything all at once. OCD

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapters! :-)

PatronTurtle

If he thinks adding new things causes the headaches, why would he add in so much new stuff at once? Add in one person per session or something to keep the payment down


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