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First World Sphere - 142 - Homecoming

🕑 Added 2023-11-05 03:35:06 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

> Thank you, Loriel. Thank you, Isla.

Silver Beard

Biggest one tbh Thank you, Loriel [Isla].

Silver Beard

Couple grammar issues; a great chapter- thanks.

Silver Beard

Her penchant to 'alter' bargains when one's back is turned or distracted needs to be nipped in the butt. Almost wish he had added a bit like Loriel didn't have the right to station her own ship there until he failed his end of the bargain. A timeline he still has a week to complete. He needs to dangle that fact in her face soon or make it public. Likely doesn't want to hurts the Isles trade opportunities; but something's got the change.

Bloodorange17

He rejected Loriel but their relationship is at a boiling point, merely rejecting selling the ship to her isn't sufficient punishment for her willingness to break their agreement. Great chapter as usual!

Kalidans2

Thanks for chapter, have a good time to rest


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