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A Soldier's Life - 123 - Contested Blades

🕑 Added 2023-12-29 19:28:11 +0000 UTC

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Fortunis

I hope he beats Boris's ass in to the sand. And fuck the bitch too for outting him.

Jason Long

Typo alert: dilibating should be debilitating

Erick Thiemke

First Citizen Boris drew attention to himself by clapping loudly. “Good display of skills, legionnaire! I would like to test myself against the best swordsman today. I am sure the Mage will give me an opportunity to exercise with this evening’s winner in front of the assembled crowd?” This is the edit. The best swordsman might mean someone not participating

Eich8noe

Which would be Castille since she should be the only mage in Mage Castille's Mage Company.

Jacob Goodwin

Okay thanks for letting me know. Not sure why I thought there were usally more. My apologies. Very good story, take no offense.

BobTheLost

Or maybe adding a 'that' between best and mage.

Robin

I think you are right, but it's still ambitious. In that case a comma would be appropriate, I think. Since he could otherwise be wanting the best mage, Castille's company has to offer.

Eich8noe

Yeah, no. She definately told in him.

Eich8noe

Only one way to keep a secret between two people...

Eich8noe

I thought the "Mage" Part was castile's honorific? So he would like to test himself agains thr best the company hast to offer

Robin

~I would like to test myself against the best Mage Castile’s company offers. I think you mean "best swordsman or legionnaire in Castille's company". Since the only Mage in the company is Castille ...

Erick Thiemke

it is two chapters every Wednesday - 9 or 10 a month or so. the advanced draft chapters are for the Seraphim tier, where they comment on edits to the story.

Jacob Goodwin

How come I can only see two chapters in book 3? Why have releases slowed so much?

Erick Thiemke

if you have trouble finding the chapters let me know

Erick Thiemke

go to collections - book one collection has the entire first book as a pdf, book 2 collection has all those chapters. in the seraphim collection is all of book three to date

Hartman Van Heerden

1st two

Hartman Van Heerden

Why is only the 1st to chapters and chapter144 available?

BLead

I want to believe in lareen that she hasn’t told the first citizen. The chapter said she smiled at him, not smiled like an evil witch. Hope springs eternal.

PatronTurtle

No, 123 is the latest chapter I have access to. It seems very likely given him talking to Lareen. She's looking out for herself and likely sold Eryk out

Mantiqore

Where can I?

Otto Kovar

I would really love to know how Eryk's stats are doing, will it be long until they are due?

Blorcyn

Oh geez. I hope Eryk is smart enough to make sure he loses. Even if the First Citizen goads him and says don’t you dare lose/give me your best. [Filth was quick to chime in, “Harpies tits, Eryk.] Filth should be Firth. There an extra so or as in the like about minotaur’s tits. Also should harpies tits be harpy’s tits, or possibly harpies’ tits?

Ha dug

Why do I have the feeling he’s gonna try and bet his necklace and runic dagger against the black blade….

Erick Thiemke

you read ahead?

PatronTurtle

I really hope he doesn't try and start a wager for the fight and trys to trick Eryk into using him dream necklace as collateral

Erick Thiemke

nice catch - corrected!

Faa Diallo

You said First citizen Brutus and the 17th paragraph I think you meant Boris

Silver Beard

Easy enough- guardians don't serve on the front lines; so whomever was weilding the blade never got a chance to face off with Elves. You heard her- serve by defending me with the blade. What situation will a First Citizen put themselves in that would provide an opportunity to kill a true Enemy. Was it the Duchess on the front with Eryk? Ofc not... and so the blade languishes

Silver Beard

The blade was meant to kill elves... drop the elf he has in storage, quench the blade, take the essence... close out this subplot forever.

Erick Thiemke

it was forged to kill a particular foe. killing that foe will restore the blade with its blood. havent decided which monster yet though

Silver Beard

Curious about the sword though; perhaps it requires a particular wielder or a bond or something to restore itself. Would think a 'pitted' blade would risk damaging the runes that make it special in the first place.

Matthew Bernardin

Awesome chappie and that’s the final nail in the coffin for Lareen I hope

Erick Thiemke

i still have two more 'extras' to catch up on seraphim chapters for soldier, hopefully get another one up on monday

Silver Beard

Thanks for the extra


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